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by Anonymous

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by 06/18/05

Nice Story

Every man's fantasy introduction to sex.

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by miriambelle6906/18/05

Good story

I like it. Thought it was a cool tiwst on the first time cliche. My only suggestion would be to flesh out your story more. Give us more about your characters. Otherwise, Bravo! -M

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by Anonymous06/19/05

Good One

Very good and the ending made it even better. One of the best I have probably read on here. Try another.........

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by TxRad06/19/05

Good one

Every man's fantasy that has ever delievered or worked in someone else's house or apartment... and to be a first is even better....

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by bigrimmstales07/12/05

a tale of six titties

I liked this one and was pleased you did not go into relentless threesomes but picked out one from the three. I've experienced something similar as a young student on the basis of a dare and I remember the feelings of embarassment and fear, but then the triumph.

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by Anonymous07/24/05

Where do you sign up to deliver pizza?

Enjoyed your first timer story. The three lovely ladies (in the nude) would have been enought to intimidate most men, first time or not. Your description of Doug's initial responses were poignant and very realistic.

The only thing missing was that Mary, or one of the other two lovelies, should have straddled his face as he lied back on the floor. There is always a first time for everything.

Great effort.

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by Anonymous10/15/05

aww

lovely first time story, and the fact that they end up together... hopefull.

well written, he's shyness, her experience... a good match.

the more of your stuff that i read, the more that i want to read... i never seem to be off this computer!!!

keep `em coming!!

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by 10/15/05

Aww Angel

That was so incredibly sweet. Almost gooey... You did good.

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by wxman200502/08/06

One of the best

This had to be one of the best stories I have read on this site in a long time. Keep up the good work.

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by sensenonsense03/02/07

lovely

very sweet and well written

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by missy_g08/22/08

Wow

It was sweet and hot! Great story.

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by james336311/17/08

Awesome ending-one of the best!

Loved your story, especially the believability of the characters. But the ending blew me away. Awesome way to get them together-very romantic...and I'm a guy!!!

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by Anonymous01/30/12

Domino's

I was a delivery driver for domino's pizza, and this story was a very good indication of the lengths some people went to to not pay for delivery, i was never used in a dare but i did pay for a lot of my deliverys on week-ends. One girl had a regular sleep-over party every month that my coworkers and myself fought tooth and nail for. Who ever delivered was always back late and she never paid.

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by Anonymous03/09/12

Liked it

Nice for a story to give us dorks some hope, thanx.

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by Ancient11733105/20/12

A thought

I gave it a 5... but not for the sex. It had heat and tease... maybe a 4 - but what made the difference was it had a sense of heart - BEFORE the ending... and your ending added a soft smile that made it a five to me.

Take care,
Chris

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by Anonymous06/05/13

Fell inlove with the dorky guy :-)

Wow what a lovely way to end that story for her to fall inlove with the dorky guy :-), reminds me of American pie number 2 with Nadia wanting her band geek guy and she takes the sherminator lol. I wish I could find a special lady to love me :-(

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Made me cum

You story made me cum

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by Anonymous02/08/17

Yummy!

A sweet, yet sexy story. 5*****
YOMEYO

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by Anonymous06/28/18

Quit too soon

Excellent storyt beginning. You could have done so much more with this premise.

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