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A Scarlett Rose: flirtacious grin

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by Anonymous06/19/05

oh that captain doodle

can turn a rose to blue...wow...now he is a charmer....winks...blue

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by dcpoet4406/21/05

i have to say....

that this is my spot i love the most. something about doodle being all charred up.....*LOL*.

Coughing and hacking in a cloud of smoke
Captain Doodle charred, felt Scarlett's throat.
"She's not breathing," He sat in panic
no pulse was found, as he removed her bonnet.
*******
i'm not sure, but i'm gonna show you this to see if it is what you had intended:

That was when the Union camp explode [exploded?]
knocking to the ground, Miss Scarlett Rose.
******
i'm enjoying this as it unfolds....nicely done.....don

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