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Oh my!!
I love this story! Great Job! I don't know if I can wait 11 weeks. :)
I am hooked and looking forward to seeing what happens next!
AWESOME!
PS. The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story, and in my mind can picture the characters and setting. This is true art! When completed you should get it published. :)
HUH?!
I can't believe I have to wait 11 weeks!! This story is so good! I'm at the edge of my seat!
WOW!!!
By far the best chapter, absolutlly brilliant and very very hot. Thanks, I'll wait for you, don't worry.good luck.xx
I am amazed
This is the most wonderful story. I read every paragraph with baited breath. The suspense and climax were masterfully orchestrated. This is the best story I have read on the web. Please continue it.
Oh wow.
Just... wow. After 5 chapters of character building (not a complaint - I love your writing style and unique humor, and I'm a fan of stories that build a real plot instead of skipping straight to "the interesting stuff"), this incredibly hot scene is well worth the wait. I can't believe it'll be almost 11 more weeks before I can hope for the next chapter. You're an amazing writer - keep up the good work!
come back soon
Missed you so much!!
Quite awesome!
This series is amazing. You should write a book. I would buy it.
miss you
please come back
amazing
I love this series,it's just plain Amazing with a capital A
11 weeks
It's been 11 weeks damnit!! I love this story so much...I sound like some crazed lunitic!! Please submit the next installment! We are all waiting!!
11 weeks & counting
update? pretty please? with sugar on top =)
worried
I'm worried, please come back, we all want to hear from you again
More Please
EveHasFallen,
What a wonderful story. I guess other life events have overtaken your time. I hope all is well, but I also hope that you will make more submissions to this story.
next one?
next chapter is all I want from Santa....
How wonderful
I have to say that this is one of the most enthralling stories I've read in a very long time. I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting.
please!!
Still thinking about you!!! please come back
WE WANT MORE!!!!!!!
plz continue plz continue im going crazy! its 11 months. plz continue!!!! i need to know how this ends! its one of the best stories ive ever read. So PLZ continue!!!!
I totally agree
This is a great story. when are you gonna finish the rest????
Is anyone still there?
It's been more than 11 weeks now. It's been 52 weeks--one year! Is Rainey ever coming back??
...
How is it that you manage to make this better and better? You are a true artist. This story draws the reader in and captures the imagination. It makes me want to write something better and more full. The way you write. Great job, and I hope this continues.
again and again
This is one of the few stories I re-read on a regular basis. These characters are like friends I'm dying to visit again and again. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. And now, like everyone else, I'm begging, please come back with more!
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