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I'm glad that he finally got laid
I think his wife needs some therapy, she must be going through some middle age crisis.
I'm glad that he is still sticking it to her, giving her the same as she did to her husband, at least for a little while yet.
This is a total loss . . .
He's an idiot, playing games and dithering. He deserves the fruits of those games. Hurting people and stringing them along, even if they are sluts and whores as she is, is just wrong. Divorce her, move on. At least she'll be better off even if it was her fault in the first place.
Well Now He's an Adulterer Too...
What did that accomplish?
Two wrongs
may never make a right, but it can help ease the pain.
the was great
It aint cheating, once the vow is broken the marriage is over, the court thing is the law big deal breaking the law doesn't send you to hell,adultery is a sin that's your honor and soul that shit sends you to hell, you have broken it before god, its over i hope he gets tons and tons of pussy. this art makes sense.
Loved this chapter
I am curious to see what direction you go from here. I am generally never a fan of the "I need to fuck someone else to make things even" mindset, but I loved this development. This was about personal healing for these two. Actually, in the interlude with Kristin I see the door to reconciliation opening. I am anxious to see if you have hubby pick up on it.
better
Glad he remembered he was a man. Saddened by the fact he still finds ANY reason to keep this piece of shit in his life. WASTE OF TIME
Don't divorce her
Just don't ever go home. And when you see her out in public? Greet her with "Hi, whore!" Perhaps the next time, "Nice to see you again, slut!"
Tom, you need to help Kristin find a job in Cleveland!
Did the author throw us these sex crumbs to partially justify the later reconciliation? I was about to comment re Tom spending the night vs. Marianne spending the night when I realized Marianne could not have done that when the kids were home; so that had only been happening while Tom was on trips AND the kids were at camp. (Detailed justification = she would not have shuffled the kids off to the grandparents on a night she was home alone with the kids. That would have raised way too many alarms.)
Amateur Shrink
Amateur Shrink? out of the mouths of babes? This is why if you are married don't go to friends for advice, how many face adultery? 8 months in this story? heavy sexual adultery where she even had sex day before her anniversary with her husband and on their anniversary night a BJ? A professional should have been sought after regardless of the cost if the marriage is worth it. This faking lies, now has changed because he now has had a sexual affair and two wrongs don't make a right. You just cannot put the bullet back into the gun once its fired.
I'm giving up on this
Just utterly unbelievable. This guy is more of a woman than his wife. Did you have a ghost wrighter for this tripe? Perhaps Matt Moreau or some other Champion of Cuckoldry?
Story Taking A Disappointing Turn
Taking marital advice from friends is stupid. He will become a willing cuckold. He will deserve anything Eddie and Marianne force him to do...wear pink lace panties...sit in a chair with a chastity cage on while he watches Eddie fuck Marianne...forced to lick Eddie's dick clean...orally clean up Eddie's cum deposits...wear a dog collar...let Eddie drill him in the ass...agree to chemical or even physical castration. Lose his children's respect...become the laughing stock of that area.
You're down to 2 ☆'s now
Its beyond silly. Rapidly approaching LUDICROUS.
#wacc_shit
I am done
unreadable
1*
What did you expect from that OhioCuck?
5
for content and effort and for a great LW story that pissed off the ashol of LIT!
5
for content and effort and for a great LW story that pissed off the ashole of LIT!
I'm so Glad He Found Kristen
I can see he is recovering a bit. You do such a great job explaining his mental progression. Sure, some inarticulate critics can't seem to "get" your effort. I just admire what you have created,
Tom?
Never forget, my man, what you had with Kristin for only a few days, your wife had with her lover for 8 months. 8 months of them lording it over you, keeping that evil secret and he was fucking you just as much as he fucked your whore.
stupid male ego
so does 2 wrongs make a right ?/ .. ABSOLUTELY NOT
if you house was on fire would you use gas to fight the fire?? .. ABSOLUTELY NOT
if one partner cheated on the other .. then would the other go and cheat to, to try and save a marriage?? .. ABSOLUTELY NOT
there is no excuse to use for her for having cheated on her hubby .. but what he did was for the sole purpose of the his male ego was hurt
mainly he used her cheating just for the sole purpose to have some pussy on the side
Just two cheaters
He's lost any moral high ground in my view. Now I couldn't really care less whether he saves his marriage or not. If the reader loses their investment in the story then it fails. Sorry well written; it could have been excellent if they had pursued a path of her finding true remorse leading to reconciliation. This is not it. 3*
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