by Lustin Kink
Hot sex and filled with emotion. An excelent start and good writing. I only saw one error, the use of "you're" where it should have been "your". One good way to check is to break "you're' up into it's two componts "you are" and see if it fits. Keep writing!
well-told story, lustin! i think it's quite good. i would however like for a bit more exploration in chapter 2 about why angela didn't barge in & confront her husband. but that's for chapter 2. :>
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I do have a problem with the plot line. A "phony return address" and NOT signing the note suggests Angela DOESN'T want her husband to know she is sending the tape...BUT what kind of fool husband wouldn't recognize his own den (which he decorated himself) not to mention the numerous times Angela smiled directly into the 'hidden' camera! Hope I'm wrong about the plot line and otherwise a very nice start!
Good opening for what I hope is a good series. Thanks for sharing.