Well written, well paced, well-dialogued, plausible, and what else? Oh, right: fucking HOT. Very well done, impressive effort. I wish I had some constructive criticism to add, but I couldn't find any fault with your story!
Great writing - nothiong bad to say about it - keep up the good work.
Well, I've had my way with both female and male bottoms and I must admit that I love such stories. This was well-written and absolutely magnifique !
A fresh look at anal. Great story. I could see it. Bravo!
This was short and good. Write some more like this.
How nice to read a well thought out, well written story. I really enjoyed it. Oh, and very HOT as well ;) thanks!
Enticing. That was a very well written story.
Thanks for sharing
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Great stuff
Well written, well paced, well-dialogued, plausible, and what else? Oh, right: fucking HOT. Very well done, impressive effort.
I wish I had some constructive criticism to add, but I couldn't find any fault with your story!
Riding a Rider
Great writing - nothiong bad to say about it - keep up the good work.
Magnifique, n'est ce pas ?
Well, I've had my way with both female and male bottoms and I must admit that I love such stories. This was well-written and absolutely magnifique !
Unique Fucking Tale
A fresh look at anal. Great story. I could see it. Bravo!
This was great!!!!
This was short and good. Write some more like this.
Great!
How nice to read a well thought out, well written story. I really enjoyed it. Oh, and very HOT as well ;) thanks!
Mmmmhmm!
Enticing. That was a very well written story.
Great Read
Thanks for sharing
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