All Comments on 'Vanessa and I - Ch 18: For You'

Story started over FIVE years ago. EIGHTEEN chapters, all one page except for one two page chapter. The two parts the The Punishment and The Client almost a YEAR apart?

We have V, Dax, Di, and Ty, or is that Ty-Di? Why waste time and effort actually typing entire names when there are initials available? I give this story two fists up... a sloppy pussy! I am on the edge of my seat anticipating chapter 19!

like sword swallowing, how much can the ladies take in their cunts. Honestly the earlier installments were more interesting when we werent sure if Dax was a cuck, if V was a cheater, etc.

I don't know what to say, this was so badly done. Please stop.

HDK is staying true to his "be nice"resolution, but he is struggling. I tried it, but only made it one day. I predict that HDK won't make it past Feb. Unless the stories improve drastically.