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Science Experiment

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by Anonymous

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by msboy806/24/05

Hot until the end...

You had a great, fun, sexy story until the end. You dropped the ball on the one yard line. Keep writing, I'll expect better from you.

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by BareBackRider206/24/05

i agree

I agree... the story was great!!! Just delete the very last paragraph ;)

Apart from that... loved it.

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by Anonymous09/06/05

They don't know what their talking about.

PERFECT as always.

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by boy2ormore11/08/05

great

hot story really liked twist at the vine doing him too

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by boy2ormore11/08/05

great

hot story really liked twist at the vine doing him too

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by Churnok05/08/09

Interesting

Some spots where I think your wording could be better, and you should develop or at least describe your characters a little. Also, some more detail about the plant and how it senses it's "prey" would be good.
Otherwise, an interesting story. I like that the plant turned on it's creator, and it taking pictures of them was a nice touch, though a bit hard to believe. This is where some more detail about the plant would be helpful. Is their some element of it's genetic manipulation that could explain this?

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