by AdventurousWendy
The value of your story isn't the excitement nor the acts themselves. The extraordinary value of your story is it's totally unique, honest and easy to read. Thank You for writing ! !
I find it is more exciting for me to write these stories than to read what my husband has written. As I write them, I relive the experiences and become aroused all over again. We each have one more story we will write, and that will exhaust our feature length stories. I have several more I could write, such as the time I did a yoga class naked (I was the only one completely naked in the class), but it isn't long enough for submission. I might be able to combine four or five of these short stories (if I can remember them, and if my husband hasn't already written about them) into one that is long enough for submission. Wendy
nothing more erotic than a woman who likes to show off her passion
The story was very good and believable, important to me. However the story telling was a bit awkward. Repeatedly talking about how many days of abstinence there had been and in the same exact terms.
Very good. Nice job with the sexual descriptions, great detail. Hard to believe this actually happening somewhere, but I suppose it's possible. I do like a "real feel " story and this one has some elements of that. Many thanks.
No, you won't see more of Wendy. The negative comments from our last two stories completely turned us off. We were critiqued as if we were writing fiction. Didn't any of the negative commentators see that the stories weren't fiction?