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ahh!!
did you have to end capt. doodle like that...right when miss rose was havin such fun....wink...blue
the grand finale
is a fitting end and appears a sequel could be forthcoming. I've pulled out my favorite spot:
Lips played and teased
while breasts were squeezed.
Some quick darting glances
and to the bushes they're dashing.
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i know that this piece is of a romantic nature and such. in a subliminal kind of way it has a blue and white collar play to it. i'd be referring to the tussle. this had a nice flow to it too art. wonderfully written.....don
*Awww*
Ya gotta be kiddin' me...
WooHooo~!! I loved it.
What a way to go huh. Poor Scarlett...
I loved the whole series. Each one has a very differ. quality of writing and humor I loved.
You do know how to hold a reader in the palm of your hand.
Yes, more please~~
This has been a cracking series
An excellent finish Art,
well written as always
and another great adventure.
I loved it!
Thanks.
~ J
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As usual Art your series are enchanting and realistic! I love the visuals here that are displayed in your rhetoric. The secret I love that you leave the ending to the heart and mind of the reader let them finish their own version! You are a master of the serial poem!
thank you for the read!
du lac~
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