All Comments on 'The Nude Waitress 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thank You for continuing to write this story

OMG I have been waiting and I am NOT disappointed. Your writing is great and this story is so layered and hot. LOVE IT! Keep 'em coming and please do NOT wait so long next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

This story just gets hotter and hotter. Can't wait to see what Jessica has arranged for her next. She is totally going to be famously whorish after that party and now with her new deal she is going to have her horizons broadened I bet. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
O Gosh!

My goodness. This tale is powerful and makes my pole stand like pillar of stone against wind. I make such great messes of my clothing when I read tales you post of such derring do. Please rush us your next expulsion of words. Apologies if google translate is excrement.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The grin almost broke his face

So would mine seeing you spin on my dick and pile drive on my cock. Wow great story.

EroticApeEroticApeover 5 years ago
FANTASTIC!

Thank you so much for adding to this series! It is one of my absolute favorites and this is a brilliant addition. Thank you!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 5 years ago
Okay, you got me now

I'd love to learn what Jessica has in mind. Luckily, I'm patient. Twenty stars from me for your Nudewaitress series, whether it's all true or not. Your stories are well paced, with tantalizing endings. Nicely done.

By now, though, hasn't our victim more than fulfilled her contractual obligations? It's a good thing she's not too bright. Or maybe, secretly, on some perhaps masochistic level she actually likes it, despite her protestations to the contrary? Some women get turned on via humiliation, and it seems she may be one. As Shakespeare once remarked in Hamlet, "The lady doth protest too much, methinks." -- JB Edwards

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hats off to u

Great going. Talentful writer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I love the story

This is a great story. I hope you can move it along a little faster. To many authors start stories that run for a couple years and then disappear before finishing. I just hope this ends well for you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Excellent

Please add more....now it's becoming a long wait....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
request update

can't wait to see what happen next

walter_rossi2011walter_rossi2011almost 5 years ago
Unfinished

Very unhappy you decided not to continue this story. Had great potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent writing.

Please continue. It seems like a Long wait now for the next part.please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Please continue

Please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Very good start

I would love to read more some of the other things suggested was good i would like to read more nude out side and driving that way and more of the lady's make her do other things!

LeBaron1987LeBaron1987almost 5 years ago
Well writren

I love the writing. I don't love that you were taken advantage of. He needs to go to jail for sexual assault.

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