All Comments on 'Sinnamon'

This story gives new meaning to the 'erotica' in 'literotica.'

This story isn't erotic... maybe scary or bizarre... but not erotic and not very good.

Give me a fucking break dude. Do you really think someone would get turned on by this? What fucking publisher let this shit through?

This story had some potential. But you went way off of the deep end with the biting of the cock then having them both dead at the end.

Don't give up...just maybe not so much drama next time..

You are one warped dude to think this is enjoyable or erotic. This is more of a horror story. Find a different website for your painful musings.

I don't find it at all erotic. Rather nasty, in the real sense of the word. Interesting that the women in your stories finish up dead because of their looks. A little enraged, are we?

It would have been erotic if she went down on him and became his whore.

The end was a boner killer.

man, you suck, and you're sick - but not even in a good way - put your rambling rubbish in the 'horror' section please, so we don't get distracted from the good stuff.

Fuck!

damn i wanted him to get with her...no offense i didn't care for it

It was ok at first but the end was just dumb

that was very fuck up

Dark...yet arousing

What the actual fuck

Maybe let people know this is a snuff and horror story? Wrong section, dude.

Also, I don't know what strip clubs you've worked in, lmao. Maybe a dingy shithole in the middle of nowhere would do something like this (killing people), but not even the shitholes near Mexico are like that. I would know: I used to dance in them. Not realistic in the least.

not the ending i was thinking was coming!!

Hilarious, didn't see that coming.

A warning at the start that the story is a bit dark would have been appreciated