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lovely piece
beautifully written and
the imagery was wonderful.
A most enjoyable read,
thanks.
~ J
Timeless....
Loved how you floated us through through the moments here blue! Scrimsaw of the pen! Excellent job!
du~
great imagery....
and seems to have a duality to it. the dark and the light come through nicely.......nicely don
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THIS was excellent!
Got to the message fast,
flowed smoothly- flawless.
Thanks for sharing.
liked this greatly
wonderful
'nuff said.
it just worked and worked
thankyou
for some reason it wont take my ID...posted by Shamanskiss..
different and effective...
and written with love....
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Yes, a couple of near-misses, "hour of darkness" as lead line,
otherwise, killer, just killer, esp last 5 lines. Better than 100
like that of the blu..
a greater expanse of vision,
as I swam into your ocean depth,
and seen the tears of the
beautiful, the silver, and the blu..
carving a place into me,
not soon to be forgotten.
beautiful. -luv2theblu.
-sGp-
pretty
this really is a lovely poem
slenderest?
maybe consider the most slender
also a possessive mistake (I cannot remember where) but it should be 's
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Most excellent; turning naked paper into stylized scrimshaw under your pen.
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Most excellent; turning naked paper into stylized scrimshaw under your pen.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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