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lol
Very good Art,
very funny and
interesting. A great
read to start my day!
Thanks.
~ J
simply
Bubbilicous...o)) blue
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Snapping and popping his way to Mensa! Loved the original thoughts here!
du~
do you have trees.......
for sale!!! i want some gummy balls too...*LOL* fantastic ending in those two last lines. very humorous......fine piece to chew on......don
LOL!
Gum didn't help me quit smoking, damn it!
Good poem. I like it a lot! :)
Blowing bubbles...
So erotic huh? Well I was thinking of blowing mainly. :P
A nutty one from a crazy guy. Good work Art!
I need to chew more..
You have more writing talent, originality than any other writer. I have had the pleasure to know.
Satin
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What can I say? Agree with below comments and end lines.
"I may not be the brightest color gum ball,
but perhaps one of the most colorful"
Does not reach for the "big moment"
Does not reek of pretension
Is not cloyingly self-important
Is consistent
Art, it is a pleasure
Dusty? no way
If you hadn't posted on the 'Dusty Poems' thread I wouldn't have noticed this.
Wonderful. What else can I say other than I'm going to rush out and buy some gum!
b'brig
~~
So there it is,
the mystery's solved;
the peroxide blonde chews
with giggles galore
to heighten her mental acuity!
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