Charlotte may wish to spank her sister's ass, or make sis lick her sexy younger pussy? Who knows, we will have to wait until chapter 3.
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Anonymous06/27/05
Always waiting for more
Will you publish a book?
by
Anonymous06/27/05
Twisted revenge...
made for a pretty hot story, although I liked the 1st story much better. I think they should forget the slut and more on w/their own happiness, which would be the best revenge.
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Anonymous06/27/05
plain rape
welp, hope Karen prosecutes. both of them are rapists, plain and simple. i sure they would enjoy prison life!
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Charlotte may wish to spank her sister's ass, or make sis lick her sexy younger pussy? Who knows, we will have to wait until chapter 3.
Always waiting for more
Will you publish a book?
Twisted revenge...
made for a pretty hot story, although I liked the 1st story much better. I think they should forget the slut and more on w/their own happiness, which would be the best revenge.
plain rape
welp, hope Karen prosecutes. both of them are rapists, plain and simple. i sure they would enjoy prison life!
Ignore the retard beneath me
Come one, she can't even spell or use proper grammar in her insults against your story. It was fantastic, not as good as the first though.
good, keep going
spell check and grammar check would make it more enjoyable. But in the next installment, make the big sister the slave of the younger sister.
Very Interesting...LOL
Good story...although I see that some of the readers can't distinguish between real life, and fantasy.
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