All Comments on 'Rent Trouble'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very nice

I don't know if you plan on continuing this story, but there is room for more. I used to have an Apt. downtown, and all of the property owners (landlords) knew each other. I think I see Maggie being pimped out to other landlords. Just a suggestion, do with the story what you'd like. Good Story, keep writting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Is this line correct?

How do you fuck me so food?!!??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
resignatedly????

resignatedly????

techsantechsanover 18 years ago
A very good story

Yeah, there were a couple of typos but the story itself was very good. I'd like to read more from you, either a continuation of this story or new ones. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Rent Trouble

Wow, is Omar going to be sorry that he decided to trade sex for rent? This story is just beginning.

Is Omar getting the only thing he wants and what of the things Missy wants from Omar as she realizes how much Omar wants the commodity that she's willing to trade.

I like your story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Story

Great story! It would be great if you continued it. Perhaps you could describe Maggie's developing relationship with Omar leading to marriage and pregnancy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lets stop kidding ourselves

Omar and Maggie obviously need each other. Forget the silly arguments about age difference. Omar needs to shoot his baby cream into Maggie and get her pregnant. This will move Maggie over her ambivelance about marrying Omar (which she consciously or unconsciouly wants to do anyway) I know they will make great lifetime partners and parents together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep up the good work

I am a 25 year old blonde haired very attractive woman who was always attracted to old fat ugly balding men. I find them sincere and for the most part real. I finally married a big fat ugly 64 year old Greek man about a year ago and I am carrying his baby now. He's a lovely man, a good provider (he owns a resteraunt) and satisfies me deeply in bed. He wants me to be a stay at home mom and have children for him. I love that plan and I am happy to be a part of it. Although I was never behind on the rent I loved the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I'm Buying Rentals

Wow I'm buying some rental apartments and hope I get paid the same way as Omar.

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