some wonderful flirtation and seduction (loved the coin bit) felt that the dressing room was a little rushed and the triple mirrors weren't given their due
some awkward wording in the 1st 2 paragraphs though the morning ritual was sweet and I was wondering (just temporarily) about bath water and the use of baby oil.
All in all though a sweetly erotic romp..... thank you
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Anonymous07/02/05
Didn't know water could be so hot!!
Un-freakin-believable!! Wow just doesnt' describe this. *she says as she clears the puddle that was her monitor* Great story!!
English
Cool
Plus I'm getting married soon :D
nicely erotic
some wonderful flirtation and seduction (loved the coin bit) felt that the dressing room was a little rushed and the triple mirrors weren't given their due
some awkward wording in the 1st 2 paragraphs though the morning ritual was sweet and I was wondering (just temporarily) about bath water and the use of baby oil.
All in all though a sweetly erotic romp..... thank you
Didn't know water could be so hot!!
Un-freakin-believable!! Wow just doesnt' describe this. *she says as she clears the puddle that was her monitor* Great story!!
Smokin'!
Loved this! The personal touches were perfect! ;)
Surprise ending!!
I totally loved that, definitely could relate to the story. The surprise ending was a niiice twist!!
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