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Great!
Love the story! Write another!!!
quick and to the point
great story! it was quick, to the point and sexy all at the same time.....great job!
too short
too short. just didn't grab my attention. a story should have some build to it. Make the person want more by dragging the story out a little further before the sex.
the orgasms are much better.
a lil short, but good
The story has good initiave, but like the other comment, it was a little short, it doesn't have to be 20 -pages long, but drag it out a little more. Leave the reader wanting so much more. But keep on writing though, you do have a way with words. And get more creative, make it a little more exciting.
SEXAY!
Thats hott! ;) Make another, more fucking! :D
I wish it was longer
It was a really good story it just wasn't long enough
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