All Comments on 'Erosion'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
reality

in this can remove the glasses painted in rainbow swirls of denial ..lovely job on the subject of aging...its like taking medicine...o)) bluerain

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Stark...

..and unforgiving read. If ever there was a poem advocating euthanasia!

'As winter draws near

her once solid frame whittles to a skeletal hue'

Is hue the right word here?

I'm nit picking. Good poem.

b'brig

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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