All Comments on 'Tara's Search'

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kerwerw over 13 years ago

Great Start, but Ending could be better

I felt like this story had a great build up, but just as the story got to it's climax it ended. I would really like to hear how "rest of the night caressing each others feet" went. I really enjoyed this story, I would just like to hear how it concludes!