All Comments on 'Soft Swing Pt. 03'

will be called...

Full Swing Ahead

LOL the ship steams on. I liked this part and how you wrote it, actually got me smiling and laughing in parts and the other parts, well, 'Alrighty Now'. :)

I saw a couple errors in there, but, eh, I liked the way it flowed. You have kept the suspense going for three chapters, it hasn't felt rushed into, good Job.

I almost expected Mel to throw the rule book away at one point. LOL She didn't and hope she doesn't.

More, please

to ask.

["Define sex,"] Jeff said, interrupting.

"Ha ha ha," Max chuckled. "Ok,[ Bill,] I mean no fucking, no sucking and no eating."

is that a Murray reference? I thought it was a name mistake but then it sounded like him.

Stay on the bus people and straight on till morning......

I have nothing against people swinging, or people writing about swinging, but if you're trying to convince me that swinging improves the sex you have with your life partner you'll need to give me a coherent reason. So far we've just had assertion, which is no substitute for argument. Specifically, having sex in front of other people is likely to be embarrassing, not erotic.

Wonderfull, well written and very hot! Looking forward to Pt. 04! Don't keep us waiting too long...….

Not Bill Murray...

It was Bill Clinton.... Jeff was saying "define sex", so Max was being sarcastic and called him "Bill" for needing to define what sex is.... It made sense to me at the time, but I think I'd originally made a reference or maybe I did, earlier, to Clinton re: his definition of sex.

I can tell you that swinging always has made sex with my spouse better between us. But, I'll let Jeff and Mel show you that in the next section "Full Swing Ahead".

KB, You did a wonderful job of expressing the feelings and emotions that Mel and Jeff felt. The explanation and opinion of Sexual Pleasures with others was addressed as well as the “Card Game” in the previous chapter. I liked the “Follow the Leader” game they played. I know some couple enjoy “role play” of what’s happening on a porno video while together so having another live couple doing it would add to the hot erotic intensity of it. Thank You and looking forward to reading the next chapter in their Adventures.

KB, please don't keep uw waiiting that long for PT4

Please do us the pleasure of the "Full Swing Ahead" ASAP. This series gets 5+stars!

Don’t leave us hanging. Great series. More please.

You should make a follow up where we see the couples transition to full swing. You do a fantastic job on these!

I just read this story today and it is a good one but perhaps one chapter short?

Sort felt we needed to read about the up and coming full swing and perhaps even what happens after that.

Please continue this series, it is great.

What an incredible story! It was like being seduced while I read it. Superb writing.

This was so stupid it was silly, a guy writing from a woman's perspective extolling his male fantasy. Nothing but a stroke story, and really lame at that.

Continue esta série , excelente !