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by Anonymous

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by RhymeFairy06/26/05

Sizzlin~

swathing its musky odor
with a butterfly tongue,
liberating her from loveless grime
beyond requisite portals
of images sublime,
and riding high,

What hott words.
Love your imagery.
It reaches out and grabbs ya.
What a steamy encounter...

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by dcpoet4406/27/05

last three lines.....

i really like alot....and it had steamy imagery...nicely done blue........don

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by Anonymous06/27/05

I love Ms Nicks

and your poems. This is a hot visual that reads well.
sand

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by Jennifer C07/01/05

nice work

A steamy lil read
with great imagery
and a nice flow.
Well done!
Thanks.
~ J

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