by jamtby
This chapter does a great job of illustrating how two people can bond regardless of their gender.. The roles of submissive and dominant support the needs for love and recognition of their individual needs I hope the author will develop these characters further. Write more.
I like the story and the interaction between the characters. The story moves along and the writer gets the reader involved with the story . Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Please get new chapters proof read.
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The first chapter was great.. then it went south and I hoped it would come back. I'm angry that it took my time and disappointed me. And never came back to a frustrated small dicked man.. becoming herself. Change the title...