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by Reltne06/26/05

A little hard to read

I have trouble with this line: "A traitor mocked his bow."
It is not clear whether the traitor was mimicing his geneflection, or putting an arrow to his longbow. I think the latter ("low" rhymes with the archer's tool - at least in modern speak), and else why does Goordie die? If so, might not "knocked" be better than "mocked" for clarity, or are you also going for the derisive meaning?

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by Anonymous10/13/05

Amen to ballads

Forth or Firth?

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by LeBroz01/13/07

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Interesting ballad of the Scottish folk.

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by duddle14602/04/07

Dialect

A very well appointed piece with accurate dialect to enhance the over all effect.

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by tazz31705/10/12

A DIARY OF THE BATTLE

read the one on Hasting, TK U MLJ LV NV

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