All Comments on 'Mystery Lover Ch. 03'

This woman was the focal point of the best fuck of her life. A living, breathing, mind-blowing fantasy come true. Nice Job.

Quit while your ahead, first one was damned good, second one was so-so, this one made her look and act like a whore and was not the ink to write it... U Got a 'W' for What the fuck are U thinking...

This bitch is a real cock hound.

You started off well but the development of the story line caved in when you started adding other players from outside the family into this story. Then it went on and on and on until it bored me. I think you have talent but refine it please.

This story went down hill fast...

Thank YOU! I hope more chapters follow soon.

great story keep it up

First 2 chapters were OK. Still Pimping his Mom in chapter 2 was bad, but chapter 3 was SICK. If you love your Mother and want sex with her, why make her a SLUT TRAMP?

Don't stop now, you have her all warmed up, what is next? Group sex? Interracial? Public exhibition? Adult stores? Glory Hole or Adult theaters?

So many ways to take this as mom becomes a slut for her son. Sounds lovely to me.

More Please!!

How much did the son hate his mother? He undoubtedly was the biggest piece of shit that ever came down the path. If you ever get the urge to write a piece of shit like this again, just give up and quite writing.

The old guy

The woman is willing, so the son expands her boundaries. However, to keep it in the family, I expected the third chapter to introduce her brother, her father or a female friend/relative. For the next chapter, I advise you to bring it on home to family again.

Very good story. Loved all the sex involved!

What? Not going to finish this? I guess it takes all kinds.

Not feeling the whole ‘son pimping out his mother’ storyline. It feels less like a loving son helping his mother explore her sexual boundaries and more like a son using his mother for his friends and his own sexual pleasure.