All Comments on 'Misadventures of a Career Girl 001'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
awsome

exellent read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Crude Crass Non-erotic Non-Entertaining & Non-

understandable - senselessly beat up and rape a woman lawyer in her office - is this your first try at writing? A strike out one could say but at least you got this crap out of your system - now settle back and just read. Don't embarrass yourself anymore.

Or change themes or soften the crazyness to a point of understanding. Where could this possibly go from here?

Erotic where?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good

good start.

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07about 15 years ago
Good!

A good no-nonsense story straight into the plot. Like the style.

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