by sloppylap
understandable - senselessly beat up and rape a woman lawyer in her office - is this your first try at writing? A strike out one could say but at least you got this crap out of your system - now settle back and just read. Don't embarrass yourself anymore.
Or change themes or soften the crazyness to a point of understanding. Where could this possibly go from here?
Erotic where?
A good no-nonsense story straight into the plot. Like the style.