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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/01/05

good job...

hurry with part 2

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by Anonymous07/01/05

More

Cannot wait for more, see how far he "pushes" his power not only with mom but others ...

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by Anonymous07/01/05

Great start

Good start keep it going does he have sisters also to get invoved with him and his mom.

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by TJ911Turbo07/01/05

A great beginning

I am hoping you take it in one of two slightly different directions. Either make his mother his sex slave, maybe in a later chapter reversing roles by her knowing he was psychic because it runs in the family or just have him run wild at school and mount every co-ed, teacher, and administrator he desires.

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by Anonymous07/02/05

Can't wait for number two

I really loved it, Get the second one done asap...

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by Ace_0207/02/05

Rush deliver, por favor

Fantastic start! Can't wait for the second.

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by Anonymous07/02/05

excellent job

great writing. Keep 'em cumming.

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by Anonymous07/06/05

great story

REALLY like your story, right up my alley. keep writing for literotica, please :)

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by fishgullet07/23/05

Good start

Reasonable premise, good insight into plausibility of resistance. I hope you will continue to develop the story line that goes along with the stroke; the way you have started, you can certainly do both. I'd give you an 85-90% if the option were available

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by Anonymous08/12/05

Waiting for Ch. 2

Fantastic story, quite alluring. Waiting for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous02/20/08

the best story ever

please wright anather one soon. the first one rocks!

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by Anonymous02/21/08

i wish there was a Pusher2 and 3 4 5 and so on

ceep up the good work.

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by Anonymous09/25/08

loved it!

As I read the story I truly wished I was that boy. To that point I wouldn't even have minded being the one controlled

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by Anonymous12/23/12

Awwww....

I really LIKED some of the stuff I wrote for chyoo on this story thread!

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