All Comments on 'Hostage to Change'

BDSM, trannie, pure horror etc.. I hope there is a second part where they get revenge. My only wiggle is that if jules could get out to save some of his sperm etc. that early on, why not go to the cops? I mean, I know why not but personally at that point I think I'd take the chance.

I have no idea what you hope to accomplish with your writing, but if its to arouse, titilate, and otherwise get people horny, then for my money you have certainly succeeded. I suppose that makes me some kind of pervert at least in the eyes of some but, it's 3:00 in the morning and I have to start work in 6 hours. I meant to go to bed 2 hours ago but truth is I couldn't stop reading and I've had an erection the entire time. Well, almost. Your story struck a cord with my fantacy life and I figure, isn't that what this is all about. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

I have read many of the stories on this site, and I must say this is one of the best. Absolutely top notch.

Very well written. However, I think this should be in "Erotic Horror".

I absolutely loved this story, only problem for me was the ending. Your writing really brought out how horrible what was happening was, so I felt sad knowing it would continue. I would love to read a sequel where they escape, a very changed relationship no doubt but a happier one.

Your story built up nicely, then stalled. The narrator's transformation helped, but there was still the desire for a final touch; the resentment building against the triplets was deep and powerful, yet nothing ever was given to suggest it ever could happen. Plus, your spelling got worse as the story progressed. I suggest you write it on a program that has a 'Spell-checking' option or run it by an editor. I originally gave it a '50' on the scale, but just changed it to a '75' for the sole reason that you did tell a good story, but that it faltered near the ending. You have promise to do much better. Show us how that can happen.

I liked the subtle hope of freedom they hung onto, while they were being converted into fuck-toys, then willing fuck-toys, then eager fuck-toys.

I was ready to give you highest marks untill the sex change. I never critisize people's fantasies, but this part didn't work for.

The whole time I was thinking, if they're alone together like this, why not simply make plans. As in, each of them gets a knife and via preplaning kills one of the triplets, then running together, the last one they take out together. Done early on, this would have been easy, even later it would have been easy enough to accomplish. Instead you are left wondering at the impotent rage, why they don't act, utilizing the weapons they have, when the triplets are vulnerable. It really does drag down the story so its simply unbelievable.

I really enjoyed this story. It turned me on a lot and I found the development of the characters fascinating but it's so sad! Please can it have a happy ending? :)

Wow

Amazing story, perfectly written, just amazing all round! Well done!

the best forced fem story here.

Thanks for sharing. I hope you're still working on it.

But very very gripping. It made my gut clench thinking about the situation they were in, yet also was well written and very erotic. I wonder what I would do in that situation. Thank goodness it is just a story. A damn good story.

Now I have to read more of this author's work.

Truly unbelievable. The three guys were able to break in without setting off the alarm system that you say they have after not getting caught by the cops. Then the couple do not get a knife to stab the guys when they get a chance or poison them in their food. And then when they each have to go out on their own; they do not alert the cops to what is going on at the house. The cops could have sneaked up to the house and shot the guys before they could have done anything. The whole thing of this going on for months without being found out is next to impossible. And to top it off even more, for the surgeries to be done so quickly by a doctor and not need a recovery and healing time to have sex; maybe possible only on Fantasy Island. It is to bad that you left the story end where the three guys were still not captured and the couple were not set free.

t His AN EXCELLENT STORY. I hope you can understand when I say it needs more. That is, I can't see them living together in a remote place ever after. Crack thieves must continue their trade. Their pride won't let them quit. So then will their two "molls" be considered accomplices? I suggest the worst is yet to come?

This is a great story--I love it. Would love to have been in his place! But please--get a proof reader. There is a huge difference between cloths and clothes. This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read, but I was constantly being jerked back into my own boring reality by the poor spelling and use of language. With a little editing, this could be one of the greatest stories ever written!

I hope you realize that I'm not trying to be mean--I really loved the story. But with editing help, it could be so much better!

This story made me cry, I couldn't find it pleasurable at all. It was just so sad and depressing and I'm just sitting here crying for this poor man.

Haven't seen any story updates in some time. Wish there was an ending.

UNO ESTRELLA

More, more, more...next chapter, please!

Loved it, couldn't stop reading.

Just amazing.... please another chapter.

Great story did girlie and baby make love as lesbians? Did baby live the rest of her life as a woman and did she marry one of the guys who changed her? I would love to have a man change me into a woman and make me suck him and let him fuck the

I'm a huge believer that sub "men" who go through feminization are the true women, while the so-called "women" who are born with that greasy slit are just...well, they are fake women.

I am also a huge believer that while any feminization is good, forced feminization is best. A true sub should not be making these decisions. She should rely on her Dom.

This story feeds both. She took so long to get to her true happiness, but it was worth it.

This is the best story I've ever read.....

by far the best story I have read. I have readit probably 50 times and it keeps drawing me back

I don’t think she really saved any of his sperm she is just trying to keep him alive ; which if they don’t kill the two he doesn’t would like he will live very long

puked, and suspect the wife was in on it

I love this story and read to once a week. love your wrk

If only recovery was so fast for sex reassignment surgery. The hormones and home laser had magical properties as well. Overall good but some things rip the reader out of the story when it becomes impossible to suspend disbelief.

How does she wake up from surgery in Thailand getting fucked by the guys? I know it’s fantasy but you have to explain impossible things even if it’s magic or it just rips the reader out of the fantasy.

This must be one of my all time favorite forced fem stories, if you're still around LittleTom thanks for writing this for us.

Yuck

Clothes not cloths. You wear clothes and use cloths to wash dishes.

Jules became Jane and back to Jules.

I stopped reading. Childish inaccurate writing 1☆.

When will you write more stories that involve forced feminisation like this? Asking for a friend :3

The MC was first alone and didn't gather weapons, then he was among the public for hours and didn't find help of report anything, then he returned early, not using time he could have purchased weapons, but he's supposed to have his predicament? Story had so much promise as a sex filled mystery, except the author forgot the mystery story part.