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Interesting start
Looking forward to seeing what else happens with the ill fated concubine.
Wonderful Start
You set up the story well. Even though there was no sex in this one, it was better that way. Should be a great series. One thing "be come" is one word noy 2. Keep writing!
Great Start!!
Every good story need a good prelude to start with and you have done a wonderfull job here.
Great Start!!
Every good story need a good prelude to start with and you have done a wonderfull job here.
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