All Comments on 'Mom's Night In The Van'

Unfortunately, my archived copy is on a laptop that's on the fritz right now so I can't track if down and prove it. Otherwise, I would have reported your sorry ass ASAP.

You'll note that I was the original author.

would like to read the continuing saga

What a wonderful story to encourage reliving similiar memories.

Eager to read the next episode.Go for it MarkEast !

Can't wait for the sequel. It would be nice that they continue their relationship. Very hot.

Hurry up and make the sequel. I can't wait.

Since you told it from the son's POV, it seems more like either incest or voyeur. It would have been better had you told it from either the mother's POV or Chad's.

You did read this years ago, and it was written by the same author moron. A simple internet search would have proved that. Unless it's a grand conspiracy and all those sites that have this story changed the name of the author to this one so he could get away with ripping off a story and posting it as his own! Idiot!

There were a few grammatical errors, so an editor would help. Will his mom want to be with him if his cock is smaller than Chad's?

the only thing required to say is please continueee

That was fucking HOT! Keep posting stories Markeast because you have talent!

loved this story the first time I read it...always wondered if there was a sequel...maybe now there would be...

lets see, this high and mighty kid with all his wisdom sets his mom up. the dad does not "deserve" her. but his slut friends do? note the father is not descibed as an alcholic, or a wife beater, or someone who does not service her - just he "does not deserve her". so the son come across as evil.....

and then the mom is an easy lay - she goes with her son, but is easily seduced by the friend. and then to top it all off, they plug all 3 of her holes - incuding the ass which her husband has not been allowed to touch, but it is an easy thing to get her now!

this story is not believable.

Loved it. Hope for more soon

Oh man, you have to write a sequel! you just have to!

And please, let the son bang his mom!

Absolutly loved your story, and please for the life of all who read these stories, make more. You are an artist, i love you.

Read this many years ago. Could not locate it. Great to see it again. Thanks for posting it again. Great Story

This is one of the best MILF stories written. I hope we get to read more from this author.

When is the sequel coming out

I want to see the son fuck his mom as well as his mate with a DP

Waiting

During the last holydays, I discovered that my 45 y.o. mom had sex with 2 moroccan 21 y.o.... Great stories like this, always remind me how horny I was when she finally confessed me what happened!

thank you for your brilliant story hit all the right parts for us and hope you do some more Liza & Bob

Oh, man! That was a hot one... the mom banging away like a slut while the son lusts for her.

good work.

Absolutely hot.....My first time at this site and my first hot story I have read....Mark I will be looking forward to see what happens next....

there are so few drive movies anymore. Very well done, and you really should follow up on this obviously to-be-continued story. Best of luck to you.

this is a very hot submission.....love the milfs being fucked by the younger guys

My wife and I love to read stories about "loving wives" to each other at night. This one gave us some terrific ideas. We hope you write a few more chapters. We have a hunch the son will be next? Either way, the mom is in for a pounding.

I felt compelled to tell you how good it was!

Vivid, Believable and Hot!

Disappointed you havn't written more stories!

Please Do!

Would love to hear what more transpires between Chad and his friend's mom. I'm sure the relationship grew stronger since they could not stop see each other.

man i love this story, brings back memories of my slutty mother,man she is a big whore,she fucked so many cocks with her mouth,pussy and big ass,but this story it reminds me my friend Fredy, as i secretly watched him fucking my mother Liza with his big cock tearing her pussy,as she was begging for more......

nice story..i had the luck too watch my mother ALICA fucking in van with my friend Lodi and i cant help it but jerking off when i remember their fucking ... as she was riding his big cock he had his face buried betwen her big tits as he was grabing her big buble buttcheeks....

I recently discovered your work, and i'm quite disapointed to see you haven't been following your storie !

Keep up writing !

Thanks for the post

I agree with Xodan, I too am disappointed you have added more to you story.

GREAT JOB HOW DID THEY MAKE OUT THEY STILL GOING AT IT

Nicely done. The next step should involve Chad tuning Tommy's dad into submissive cuckold.

You should continue writing.... can make good series.

PLEASE CONTINUE - well written

plzzz keeep it up..more posts awaited..

Best story I've read in a long time on here.

I hope the next part comes out well with you getting to screw your mom in all her holes..

This is a hell of a story. Good one in a long time.

You have got to keep writing! Great story line and it leads to even better one for mom and son !!!

CONTINUE THIS STORY

write another story please

Can you give your moms number.. so i can also try her but tell her not to take pills and also dont allow anyone to sleep with her. because i want her to beg me to breed her and to be your new dad for a couple of months.....

Somewhat entertaining story, but all this

high praise is way over the top. You

critics are way too easy to please.

Just a slam bam thank you mam tale

written in elementary fashion! Check

out real authors such as Selena Kitt or

Colleen Thomas if your going to lavish

high praise.

I read this story way before Literotica was areound on another site that is no longer.

I absolutely think this is one of the hottest if not the hottest story on the internet.

However I also know from history that the author probably will never write another story ever again.

Tis a Shame,

John

hope the son gets some

i kill chad and then her son,,, he a screw up ass hole

It would have been better if the Mom had been divorced or if you at least took some more time to paint the father as a real asshole. As it is, you turned her into just another cheating slut, unable to resist the cliched young, large cock.

There is nobody to like in this story. It left me looking forward to another chapter when the father throws her cheating ass out in the street without a pot to piss in. And when he finds out the son set her up, he can toss his ass out as well.

I enjoy Loving Wives cheating stories, which this could be, only when they have consequences for the cheater's actions, regardless of the gender.

I just loved that story and need to her more please....

hawt and sexy. Wish there were a next part. Maybe Chad and Son.

Please hurry n write part 2. Keep up the good work.

where is part two?? waiting so eagerly

It seems ordinary to me

You should suck Chads cock maybe taste your moms juice, have you suck Chad? Im thinking you have.

The story reminded me my mom who was a huge slut.she has been fucking several guys behind my dads back.

He's a bigger loser than his dad if he set up a friend to take mom while he gets a video PLEASE how dumb! Come on writer use some common sense here.

Chad's horse dick should have been up your ass instead of Mrs. Browning's. Fucking weirdo...

I really liked the story, would love to see a sequel.

Lame ass son sets up mother to be fucked. Leaves her to with friend not knowing if she was willing or even interested. Of course the friend is a football star hung like a horse that has fucked many girls( can anyone spell STD's) We all know that all he has to do is whip it out and any woman including his mom would lose her mind and give her self willingly. Give me a break this story is so lame I was sorry I wasted the time reading it.

and my dad is blacker then the ace of spades. She got knocked up early and is only 39 now, im 25 and she could go and be on the TV show Three's Company if she wanted to be. But that Janet is such a bitch.

at the drive in and got knocked up. Now we are waiting for the baby to come some she can fuck some other guy and get knocked up. She has decided to have 6 more kids, all by different races, she's getting a black guy next, then a Chink, then a Packy, then a Mexican and so on

That fucking bitch, all she ever does is fucking complain

Now when ever we go to that place I order a hot dog for my mom

Fucking grow up. You are not fooling no one. We all can tell its just one person spamming the comment section and trying to make others feel stupid. You are only making yourself look extremely stupid.

Now about 'BetterEnding' comment.

Who are you that you feel privileged enough in dictating who the writers write their stories? To me you are slim or worse than slim, You're a bully. To me bullies are so stupid they need to be put in their place ever so often.

Writers who write for free do so for the pure enjoyment of it. If they get paid to write then maybe you can dictate the ending to their stories. If you don't like the story then don't read it, it's just that fucking simple.

Do you have any stories here we can tear apart? If you want a particular ending then write the story yourself but make sure it's not connected to anyone else's story unless you have their permission.

You talk about consequences. Hmm in life there cannot be great pleasure without equally painful consequences. The greater the pleasure the more painful the consequences. It's what life is. We make the choice of if we want to pay the piper or not. When I read an erotic story from an erotic story site such as this one the LAST thing I wish is to read a story about fucking consequences. That is just stupid you know.

A word about a sequel -

As I already said in an earlier comment I have read this story way before Literotica was even thought up. There was a website called 'White Shadow'. That website was a lot like Literotica but it was around in the early days of the internet. I read 'Mom's Night in the Van' there. I loved it. I waited for a sequel but non came. I will not hope for a sequel if I were you.

Thanks Mark for your story,

John

My Indian brahmin mom is really hot and my friend Parag liked her. He started visiting me often and every time mom used to offer tasty dishes. Once she wanted to go market he offered to accompany and she was ready. Instead of regular saree she wore salwsr kurta which display her assets. They went and came late, she was looking flushed. In next days they started going often and coming late. Once they gone and I spied when emtered public garden and choose secluded place. In few minutes kisses started and later I saw he grabbing her nice boobs.

This continued for a month and one afternoon he bedded her in our guest room.

In next week as planned she took him in her marital bed for full night fu king her four times.

She started openly kissing him in front of me and I told them to go for fucking

ln turn I got mouthful of his come from her cunt.

Recently he fucked her pussy and me her ass.

awesome. wish there was more.

the kid is crazy letting his friend do his mom and being happy about it shouldve been doing it himself

This isn't very believable that he'd set up someone else to fuck his mom. And then watcha videotape of it and hear a phone call about a Hotel Meet between his Mom and his buddy. Not creditable at all, he would have hatched that plan to get her high so that he himself could fuck her. Rethink your plots a little.

It's a bit short, but a good set up for the son to get in on the action... and if ol' mom doesn't want to go for it, hey, he can always show her a copy of the tapes as... incentive.

Not well written.It's a stupid story. The characters are not believable and the motivation is non-existent. He sets up his MOTHER to screw a high school boy?

And he wants to screw her as well? No way.

There's MUCH more to this story. When will we see it?

I had a van years ago...had many fun parties in that ole van...

Hope your friend power fucks a baby in your mom. Once she is pregged you can fuck her bareback and whore her out too.

Fucking slut, won't let hubby fuck her ass, but let son's friend and then says it a one time thing but goes back for more, fucking slut!!!

Seems clear you just can't please everyone. Credit to those who do not like this but at least post a comment with their real user name. Overall though, my thoughts are.... Chill people; it's just a STORY. I have not found any others like this, so I enjoyed it for the different concept it came from. I would have personally enjoyed it if it had required more effort to get her to give in, but I still liked the overall story. Too bad it seems this will be the authors only story. Anyone game to write a follow-up?

This story was fucked up not only did the mother betray her son by fucking his friend the son betrayed his mother by allowing his friend to seduce and fuck her all you did in this story was promote betrayal from both mother and son it is stories like this that make people think it is ok to betray the people they love the most I had a friend tell me at school before that he wanted to fuck my mother and I kicked his ass for it and we were no longer friends if my mother would have betrayed me by fucking one of my friends not only would have my so called friend got his ass kicked if not killed I would have disowned my mother packed my things and left and never would have seen or spoken to her again in this story the son needs his ass kicked if not killed for betraying his mother like that and allowing his friend to fuck her someone also needs to do the same to the mother for betraying her son and fucking his friend

No good son would betray his mother like that and no good mother would betray her son like that nice job in promoting and saying it is ok for a mother to betray her son and for a son to betray his mother ass hole I can't help but wonder if that is what gets you off betraying your mother and in return her betraying you

A son who thinks his mom is hot and wants to fuck her is going to help someone else fuck her? I don't think so........

I have seen this in reality. Not the video and the shag wagon, but setting up someone to get shagged and hearing about it later, is not so uncommon. Friends and relatives who ask, "How did your date go?" want all the hoary details so they can visualize themselves in the other's place.

I don't want to be disturbed when I'm giving it good to my mom repeatedly, over and over, again, and again.

WoW, you just messed up your character. Now he's some kind of loser or gay ass. He wanted to be the one screwing his mother. but you... I don't know man, what kind of loser ass logic in here?

Decently told story, Your work on this story cries out for more. I for one would gladly read more of your work.

So I was wondering who the father of the son was. His cheating mother didn't seem to have any trouble scoring with his friends. A promise from a cheater is like gold at the end of the rainbow. Still the cheating mom could probably make some real money scoring on the street or maybe a fraternity.

lol

Oh this is what dreams are made from, well paced and well described, far fetched but good.

Now its time for another chapter where Chad lets his buddy quietly slip into the motel room and do a surprise DP on his mom.

where's the one you get it with your mom

well written and hot. room for more chapters, good story, I loved it.

Just totally delicious, thank you.

Sarah Leather, London England.

Absolutely HOT! A 2ND Chapter will be welcomed, maybe with Chad impregnanting the Mom!

Would be for her son castrating then killing chad. Then fucking and knocking his mother and tells my his dad he did it to his whore mother

Story was too complex to squeeze into one page. "Mom" is described as a "good girl" who never strayed, but is fine with drinking and smoking dope with her son and his friend. Some simply enjoyed the story's theme but I would have liked the author to come up with a more believable inititial seduction. Also, having the boy being okay with Chad thinking his mother was hot is one thing, but wanting her himself is another. Too many things getting mixed in one story. Add a page or two and have a better set up with more detail.

An excellent story, i enjoyed it very much, it may be very packed to be in one page, but i still loved it so much, i can't wait for the next part of it, thank you for writing it

A sequel to this story would have been very nice. This is the only post/story from this writer and 12+ years after it being originally posted it still gets current positive reviews.

and stop writing crap this bad. With a whore for a mother, no wonder the kid is a screaming asshole for a son.

My mom was outright cock hungry in her 40s (less in her 50s).

Being a peeping tom son, i managed to see things...

I never ratted on her (she was married to my dad).

She was in more than 3/4 of my jack-off fantasies.

can forget it. This story was written originally in the 1980's and just been repsoted here when the primal posted shit was shut down.

Nice story and I hope son gets some. It would be glorious if son got to eat her creampies.

I was a voyeur son back in the days.

Hope she went off the pill and got knocked up by sons friend even better her own son.