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Mom's Night In The Van

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/28/05

I read this years ago

Unfortunately, my archived copy is on a laptop that's on the fritz right now so I can't track if down and prove it. Otherwise, I would have reported your sorry ass ASAP.

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by MarkEast07/28/05

When you find it

You'll note that I was the original author.

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by Anonymous07/29/05

good story

would like to read the continuing saga

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by Anonymous07/29/05

Who cares if it's happened before ? It's real !

What a wonderful story to encourage reliving similiar memories.
Eager to read the next episode.Go for it MarkEast !

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by Anonymous07/29/05

Great Story!!!

Can't wait for the sequel. It would be nice that they continue their relationship. Very hot.

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by Anonymous07/29/05

Awsome!!!!

Hurry up and make the sequel. I can't wait.

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by SlickTony07/29/05

Is This the Right Category?

Since you told it from the son's POV, it seems more like either incest or voyeur. It would have been better had you told it from either the mother's POV or Chad's.

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by Anonymous07/29/05

Good Story, & to Anonymous who thinks it's stolen

You did read this years ago, and it was written by the same author moron. A simple internet search would have proved that. Unless it's a grand conspiracy and all those sites that have this story changed the name of the author to this one so he could get away with ripping off a story and posting it as his own! Idiot!

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by msboy807/29/05

Good Story

There were a few grammatical errors, so an editor would help. Will his mom want to be with him if his cock is smaller than Chad's?

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by Anonymous07/29/05

superb

the only thing required to say is please continueee

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by 1WILD107/29/05

NICELY DONE!

That was fucking HOT! Keep posting stories Markeast because you have talent!

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by Anonymous07/29/05

WOW!!

loved this story the first time I read it...always wondered if there was a sequel...maybe now there would be...

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by Anonymous07/30/05

a differning point of view

lets see, this high and mighty kid with all his wisdom sets his mom up. the dad does not "deserve" her. but his slut friends do? note the father is not descibed as an alcholic, or a wife beater, or someone who does not service her - just he "does not deserve her". so the son come across as evil.....

and then the mom is an easy lay - she goes with her son, but is easily seduced by the friend. and then to top it all off, they plug all 3 of her holes - incuding the ass which her husband has not been allowed to touch, but it is an easy thing to get her now!

this story is not believable.

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by Anonymous07/30/05

Waiting

Loved it. Hope for more soon

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by Forsaken One08/01/05

Damn!

Oh man, you have to write a sequel! you just have to!
And please, let the son bang his mom!

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by Anonymous08/04/05

A-FUCKING-MAZING

Absolutly loved your story, and please for the life of all who read these stories, make more. You are an artist, i love you.

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by Anonymous08/26/05

Thanks for reposting

Read this many years ago. Could not locate it. Great to see it again. Thanks for posting it again. Great Story

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by Anonymous09/01/05

OUTSTANDING MILF Stories ever

This is one of the best MILF stories written. I hope we get to read more from this author.

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by Anonymous09/13/05

Incredible

When is the sequel coming out
I want to see the son fuck his mom as well as his mate with a DP
Waiting

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by Anonymous01/15/06

Always wonderful!

During the last holydays, I discovered that my 45 y.o. mom had sex with 2 moroccan 21 y.o.... Great stories like this, always remind me how horny I was when she finally confessed me what happened!

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by Anonymous01/28/06

right on

thank you for your brilliant story hit all the right parts for us and hope you do some more Liza & Bob

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by Anonymous07/19/06

Damn HOT

Oh, man! That was a hot one... the mom banging away like a slut while the son lusts for her.

good work.

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by Shane208/03/06

OOOOOOH WEEEE! Hot

Absolutely hot.....My first time at this site and my first hot story I have read....Mark I will be looking forward to see what happens next....

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by Anonymous08/12/06

Too bad....

there are so few drive movies anymore. Very well done, and you really should follow up on this obviously to-be-continued story. Best of luck to you.

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by truman200503/31/08

very hot

this is a very hot submission.....love the milfs being fucked by the younger guys

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by Anonymous05/22/08

We loved it!!

My wife and I love to read stories about "loving wives" to each other at night. This one gave us some terrific ideas. We hope you write a few more chapters. We have a hunch the son will be next? Either way, the mom is in for a pounding.

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by Anonymous08/07/08

Best Story i've read!

I felt compelled to tell you how good it was!
Vivid, Believable and Hot!
Disappointed you havn't written more stories!
Please Do!

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by Anonymous11/04/08

More

Would love to hear what more transpires between Chad and his friend's mom. I'm sure the relationship grew stronger since they could not stop see each other.

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by Anonymous03/07/09

best story

man i love this story, brings back memories of my slutty mother,man she is a big whore,she fucked so many cocks with her mouth,pussy and big ass,but this story it reminds me my friend Fredy, as i secretly watched him fucking my mother Liza with his big cock tearing her pussy,as she was begging for more......

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by Anonymous06/06/09

i had same experince...

nice story..i had the luck too watch my mother ALICA fucking in van with my friend Lodi and i cant help it but jerking off when i remember their fucking ... as she was riding his big cock he had his face buried betwen her big tits as he was grabing her big buble buttcheeks....

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by Xodan02/08/10

Good Job but where is the following

I recently discovered your work, and i'm quite disapointed to see you haven't been following your storie !

Keep up writing !

Thanks for the post

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by texasreb136902/17/10

I agree.

I agree with Xodan, I too am disappointed you have added more to you story.

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by Anonymous06/25/10

GREAT JOB HOW DID THEY MAKE OUT THEY STILL GOING AT IT

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by Anonymous07/11/10

Nicely done. The next step should involve Chad tuning Tommy's dad into submissive cuckold.

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by Anonymous05/31/11

Good Story

You should continue writing.... can make good series.

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by Anonymous06/12/11

SHAME ONLY STORY - VERY GOOD

PLEASE CONTINUE - well written

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by rashmi836306/30/11

dat was damn hot

plzzz keeep it up..more posts awaited..

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by Anonymous08/06/11

Mom Night in the Van

Best story I've read in a long time on here.

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by Happyrelease08/28/11

Well writen

I hope the next part comes out well with you getting to screw your mom in all her holes..

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by Anonymous10/07/11

YOUR #1 FAN

This is a hell of a story. Good one in a long time.
You have got to keep writing! Great story line and it leads to even better one for mom and son !!!

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by Anonymous10/08/11

DAMN

CONTINUE THIS STORY

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by castrostu11/04/11

Best Story on here!

write another story please

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by Anonymous11/22/11

Nice

Can you give your moms number.. so i can also try her but tell her not to take pills and also dont allow anyone to sleep with her. because i want her to beg me to breed her and to be your new dad for a couple of months.....

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by Jorgy44405/18/12

Story is Decent

Somewhat entertaining story, but all this
high praise is way over the top. You
critics are way too easy to please.
Just a slam bam thank you mam tale
written in elementary fashion! Check
out real authors such as Selena Kitt or
Colleen Thomas if your going to lavish
high praise.

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by johnstang206/02/12

No use asking for another story

I read this story way before Literotica was areound on another site that is no longer.

I absolutely think this is one of the hottest if not the hottest story on the internet.

However I also know from history that the author probably will never write another story ever again.

Tis a Shame,

John

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by Anonymous06/08/12

hope the son gets some

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by Anonymous07/30/12

mom in a van

i kill chad and then her son,,, he a screw up ass hole

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by BetterEnding11/28/12

Just Another One

It would have been better if the Mom had been divorced or if you at least took some more time to paint the father as a real asshole. As it is, you turned her into just another cheating slut, unable to resist the cliched young, large cock.

There is nobody to like in this story. It left me looking forward to another chapter when the father throws her cheating ass out in the street without a pot to piss in. And when he finds out the son set her up, he can toss his ass out as well.

I enjoy Loving Wives cheating stories, which this could be, only when they have consequences for the cheater's actions, regardless of the gender.

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by koukla131301/08/13

More please...

I just loved that story and need to her more please....

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by playswdaddy02/15/13

yesss

hawt and sexy. Wish there were a next part. Maybe Chad and Son.

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