All Comments on 'Lila Continues To Explore College'

by rocketgirl2011

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sounds like me

This story was hot. I wish it were longer and I can't wait for it to continue. I'm glad I found an author on this site that likes white guys dominating black chicks too. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Cool Story

I'm digging your writing style and the subject matter. Please keep the stories coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
chocolate vanilla swirl

The story is great. I love black girl/white guy. Will you talk to a white guy/fan?

bill_sizer@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Building Nicely.

It's interesting how, bit by bit, you reveal the characters' motivations. If there was a comment field for "Reunite", I'd comment about that, but hold my tongue for now so as to avoid spoilers for that story. The Angelina Jolie bit is interesting.... can we expect a story by you in the "Celebrities" section any time soon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice...

I really enjoyed it...keep the stories coming!! When are you submitting again??

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good story..keep writting..very interesting

keep writting

Peter_AbelardPeter_Abelardalmost 13 years ago
"...forbidden fruit...?"

I suppose that there are white men who look on black women as "forbidden friut." That seems less likely, however, that men who grew up in a large city, who went to an urban university, and who work for a living would feel that way. I think that in any of those situations a white man is likely to meet an appealing black woman. I've met several.

I do understand how having a male character who feels this way would enhance the dramatic tension. In your story, however, it is the female character who is projecting this motivation on the male one. What to make of that?

I've enjoyed your stories. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
names

so travis is or was trevor?

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