This story was hot. I wish it were longer and I can't wait for it to continue. I'm glad I found an author on this site that likes white guys dominating black chicks too. Love it.
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Anonymous07/17/05
Cool Story
I'm digging your writing style and the subject matter. Please keep the stories coming!
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Anonymous01/15/06
chocolate vanilla swirl
The story is great. I love black girl/white guy. Will you talk to a white guy/fan?
bill_sizer@yahoo.com
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Anonymous01/21/06
Building Nicely.
It's interesting how, bit by bit, you reveal the characters' motivations. If there was a comment field for "Reunite", I'd comment about that, but hold my tongue for now so as to avoid spoilers for that story. The Angelina Jolie bit is interesting.... can we expect a story by you in the "Celebrities" section any time soon?
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Anonymous04/15/06
Nice...
I really enjoyed it...keep the stories coming!! When are you submitting again??
I suppose that there are white men who look on black women as "forbidden friut." That seems less likely, however, that men who grew up in a large city, who went to an urban university, and who work for a living would feel that way. I think that in any of those situations a white man is likely to meet an appealing black woman. I've met several.
I do understand how having a male character who feels this way would enhance the dramatic tension. In your story, however, it is the female character who is projecting this motivation on the male one. What to make of that?
I've enjoyed your stories. Keep writing.
English
Sounds like me
This story was hot. I wish it were longer and I can't wait for it to continue. I'm glad I found an author on this site that likes white guys dominating black chicks too. Love it.
Cool Story
I'm digging your writing style and the subject matter. Please keep the stories coming!
chocolate vanilla swirl
The story is great. I love black girl/white guy. Will you talk to a white guy/fan?
bill_sizer@yahoo.com
Building Nicely.
It's interesting how, bit by bit, you reveal the characters' motivations. If there was a comment field for "Reunite", I'd comment about that, but hold my tongue for now so as to avoid spoilers for that story. The Angelina Jolie bit is interesting.... can we expect a story by you in the "Celebrities" section any time soon?
Nice...
I really enjoyed it...keep the stories coming!! When are you submitting again??
good story..keep writting..very interesting
keep writting
"...forbidden fruit...?"
I suppose that there are white men who look on black women as "forbidden friut." That seems less likely, however, that men who grew up in a large city, who went to an urban university, and who work for a living would feel that way. I think that in any of those situations a white man is likely to meet an appealing black woman. I've met several.
I do understand how having a male character who feels this way would enhance the dramatic tension. In your story, however, it is the female character who is projecting this motivation on the male one. What to make of that?
I've enjoyed your stories. Keep writing.
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so travis is or was trevor?
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