by janscoM
What a fun, teasing story! Can't wait for the next chapter of adventures!
This story really turned me on. I loved the way Claire teased the boys and was so daring, while still managing to keep things innocent and fun. It's so sexy thinking of the looks she let them have and of the way she ended up, completely bare, with only her hands to cover herself up. Thanks for writing.
Amazing! Keeping up the illusion of innocence was brilliant. Can’t wait for part 2.
PS
Make sure to keep the suspense through part 2, and don’t rush into exposing too much too soon. Let them feel, but only with an “excuse” like pulling down the panties or testing the strength (brilliant ideas btw) and nothing too overtly sexual as it would break the illusion.
I adore this story! Great build up! Reminded me of a time I was a nit of a dope in a friend’s dorm room as she changed. I was too much of a gentlemen. Opportunity missed obviously. I enjoyed the touch of innocence and confusion in the end.
I have been looking back everyday waiting for the next parts. It is a huge turn on.
This is a great story! Love it. All three parts so far. Keeps me reading!
I loved your story and can’t wait to read the two sequels! Incredibly hot. I would gladly pay to see this in video form! I have my fingers crossed that she gets to see the gents reciprocate soon, not sure how they have kept their hands off of themselves!
Right now I have a raging hard on, I always enjoy a good story, but this one goes beyond "good". Love it!
Quite erotic . Nice to see a story that isn't straight into sex. In realty sex is a game and one that gets played quite a bit before coitus .