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by Anonymous

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by dcpoet4406/29/05

and then back....

to feel the innuendos of the bad as it implies. love the movement of the poem with its meta-like presence.......don

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by RhymeFairy06/30/05

Holding it in....

You go gurl~!!

Sometime ya just have to do what ya gotta do.
Don't hold it in. Let it out... be free....
Loved this lil poem.
Very spirited, and your imagery.. is spot on!!!

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by Jennifer C06/30/05

Nice one

A very enjoyable read,
I loved the flow of this
and the imagery is
wonderful.
Nice work,
Thanks.
~ J

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