The sex was good and hot! It was great when he made her do something that she didn't like. Her facial expressions really illustrated her displeasure well. Only 1 thing, isn't three thirds a whole, I.E. all the way in? Good writing.
I think that this will be one hot series. Keep going.
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Anonymous07/06/05
I agree with "Great Start"...
3/3 is a w'hole' but you could have him fuck her 4/3 but that mean he'd need a stone dick to penetrate her spine & the skin back there. That's a little too messy for my taste. WOULD YOU HAVE HIM RUIN A PERFECTLY GOOD POOL TABLE?
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I loved it!!
That was freaking hot!! Yup, you did it to me! :)
Great Start
The sex was good and hot! It was great when he made her do something that she didn't like. Her facial expressions really illustrated her displeasure well. Only 1 thing, isn't three thirds a whole, I.E. all the way in? Good writing.
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I think that this will be one hot series. Keep going.
I agree with "Great Start"...
3/3 is a w'hole' but you could have him fuck her 4/3 but that mean he'd need a stone dick to penetrate her spine & the skin back there. That's a little too messy for my taste. WOULD YOU HAVE HIM RUIN A PERFECTLY GOOD POOL TABLE?
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