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Wow!
Can't wait for some more!
Great
This is a really interesting idea for a series, cant wait for the next chapters!
Go Girl!
knocking down those survivor cates! keep it going...wanna see you in 1st soon! :)
Kisses,
T
Great Writing!
You have moved this series on well. Keep going! his is Hot and is gonna get Hotter!
laughable
serial poster with their groupies giving high ratings in competition. vix award by the committee of writers. no matter how much planted feedback you get it still does not hide you are a poor writer.
enjoyable tale
Well I don't know the author from adam and I enjoyed it. A bit short and uneventful, but it is a chapter not a shortstory.
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