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Lukas

INCREDIBLE. PLEASE DONT STOP.

Your stories with priscilla, the bridesmaid and even with the mother were better. Those three can be made into series. We need a mother-in-law and more sisters-in-law.

It was a quickie, which was good but there were some grammar errors and if she was going to dominate him then you should have laid that groundwork...

the impregnation of his daughter was the icing on the cake thanks

you know you gotta continue this one in the church. the story is good ground work for at least 2 more parts

great please more

Loved the dialogue between daughter and father. Leave the character's as is and build on that. The daughter taking control of the family would be sweet. To many character's involved would make the situation less desirable. I like the intimate situation between father, daughter and mother. Humiliation of the mother would be the icing on the cake.

This was one of the hottest stories I've ever read on this site! Please keep this story-line going. I would love to hear about how they fuck in church, and how she does have his son!

Why does a woman have to be put down and degraded, so that another woman feels superior? This story had the potential to be hot, but you kept talking about one woman's weight yet praising the other female to high heaven. Sounds a bit harsh to me. A woman's sensuality is defined by who she is, not by the clothes she wears or lack of clothes.

Too much cursing is a bit of an overkill as well. I just don't get it how some people think that having a garbage mouth is sexy, especially on a woman. It just makes the woman look uglier. Try making your characters stronger not colder.

-From a fellow writer in Literotica.

This was one hot story! I love the fact that she dominated her father! One of the best I've read here. Will there be more parts?

mmmmmmm daughter dominating dad, my dick was so hard reading this story. more please

my dick got very big reading this story and i shot a huge laod ah,ah

It needs a sequel!

loved it, dont mind the user above who rated it a 25, he was obviously made fun of for weight, as for the rest of us, the cursing and rough domination was what done it for me atleast ^^ very nice

Please continue this story. Maybe in a 2nd chapter you could tell us what becomes of the mother. I would also love to hear about the daughter actually getting pregnant, marrying her father and starting a whole new family. Totally hot story. Can't wait to read more.

Great Story.... sounds like one of my more memorable fanasies... Would love to read more in this story. Keep writing more.

i agree that hmmmm has had some problems in his life. this was a great story. maybe he loves it when women use good manners during sex. lol

and so squishingly Yummy...

It was certainly an interesting attempt... Too short for my likes. Background relationship between father and daughter could have been stronger and stronger character build-up would have been preferred. Also a lack of versatility with word usage. Try finding a thesaurus. Constantly using "Dick" and "Pussy" gets tiring and dull.

This Is One Hell Of A Story. Please Get Us Thee Next Chapters Quik!

A father and daughter fucking is great. They were both of age and they enjoyed fucking, so why shouldn't they do it. I especially liked the way he shoved his cock deep and squirted his cum all the way up her cunt. Fathers should fuck their daughters once they are old enough. And this story was a good one to jack off to. That was nice too.

Thanks!

does every story really have to start with an eighteen year old girl? Maybe just once she could be 16 or 22. It's just a story. Nobody on this site has the right to call anybody else a pervert. Come on! ;-) other than that, great story.

What are her measurements?Which celeb does she resemble?Nationality?

*glomp Wannabeboytoy* ^.^

Lines like "'Yes, Daddy! You cannot resist me! It is futile. I will have your baby! I will give you a son, unlike that fat bitch you're married to! Now impregnate your daughter like the bad girl she is! I'm such a nasty slut! I LOVE IT!'" tell you everything, you need to know to dispose this text.

–AJ

IMA (1) ERO (1) ATM (0) SOP (0) DIS (-1)

The only "quality" of your story is that it seemingly contains no plagiarism. Thus your story's quality averages in at 0.1 points (best possible = 5.0). Your story receives a malus of -1 for being completely inhuman tripe.

oh to have daughters like that

Keep up the good work

It was a very hot story and text between caracters is very good and exiting!

Hope you'll do a second part!

that was fucking hott!! i loved it!!! more moree!!!!!

Dude I feel bad for the wife...

I want a dady to fuck my pussy!

That was so hot\\!!

My ultimate fantasy.

wow dat was super awesome! *cat*

fuck i want my daddy's sperm up in my womb

God, that was fucking hot. Keep it up! I wish this had happened to me. I want my very own Papa to fuck me and Give me his beautiful baby.

That was fucking hot, made me so horny, had me cumming real good. Keep it up! Part 2 and 3?

Now I want my daddy to ram his big 10 1/2 inch daddy dick in my 18 year old virgin pussy so bad that im dripping right now. Oh here he comes, oh fuck im gonna ride his big 4 in wide cock forever, he's never gonna leave my pussy!!!

Ohh hot damn! My pussy is so hot! I want my daddy's cock uP in my hot, dirty, naughty little pussy. Oh yesss...

Call me 9604716808.i never had sex.i realy want to satisfy my self.

Reading that only made this pussy wetter. As I play with my wet dripping pussy, vibrator against my swollen clit and dildos inside my pussy and the other slowly pushed in my little ass. Wish daddy's cock was in my wet pussy and uncle doing me hard from behind.

Fuck! My pussy got so wet from reading this! I wish my daddy was here to shove his fat cock in me pussy!

After me and my 5 cousins read that they fucked me hard until my pussy weared out.......ahhhhhh they are fucking me again i wish that we could always do this fucking thinh my pussy is dripping wet

I want to be a daddy drop me a text 3862374522 if ur looking for a daddy

Ohh god! My pussy is sooo wet! Who's looking for a daughter of their own 2 fuck?????

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I need it&I want it<3 I'll be ur Princess ;)))

Burn hell u freak !!! These comments r gross :( y the F*@k wanna have sex own daughter? Now what leave ur wife 4 ur daughter? U 2 get marryed have children on ur own?? White people r crazy

to those who say incest is gross and burn in hell etc... i have 2 things to say. 1) this is just a story on the internet and 2) um, if you really feel that way... why the hell are you on this site to begin with, hmm?

you get the odd comment probably from people who still possess a drip or two of moral certitude who are here for the romance, erotic couplings, poetry, great vamp and wolf tales, legit gay lust and gorgeous bad Loving Women.

Unfortunately, but probably well for the community, we also share this site with incest. It's popular. Your comments and our comments mingle on the feedback portal.

Occasionaly one or other of us may get pissed at some cunt lauding about fucking his daughter or son, probably who's just 'eighteen' or equally as bad, a sister, or a mother..

A lot of ordinary people don't think that way. We are not all fucking nonces...

skank

I loved it. I prefer the dad to be more dominant than the daughter, it's hotter to me and dads are usual more domineering but it worked anyway. Got me wet :D

please please please , write a follow up ,its sooooo hot

bad spelling is a turnoff....the word is "skank"...

I want to seduce my dad, just like your story. I want my dad to make me his wife, preggo me, and dump the bitch. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com so hit me up dad. I wish I could own your cock

made my nightly masturbation even better!!!

i am a girl my pussys still wet

hey i fuc*** my father and you know it felt oh sooo gud then my mom saw us and then joined us and now we r naked cumming and he is giving me a facial with cum...... and my mom

Fuck!! I cummed so hard my legs were nearly paralyzed. And my boyfriend just fucked my brains out on the kitchen table, I won't be able to walk for weeks!!

My step dad fucked me, it was fun....he saw me and my now ex-boy friend making out, sent him out and showed me what the word fuck realy means

Too bad your daughter will be useless for fucking after she has your incest baby. Hopefully she will give you a daughter/grand daughter you can use for a sex toy.

That was sooo hot. I can't help but finger myself and think of taking my father just like that. Fuck me daddy!

Yum

Depraved and wonderful

Need more of that little bitch....A definate "10"

I know it's been YEARS since you wrote last but I have to say, this story is still so HOT that I always revisit it and wish that it would be turned into a longer story or even a series of stories. This is so hot and depraved that I wished that it would go further and get even dirtier! Even the mom could start working out and become a more active participant once she sees that her slut daughter has been stealing her husband's attention. She could get jealous and then decides to get sexy again and play around herself. Also, more people could get involved. Friends, neighbors, and/or relatives could get into the mix. Just a few thoughts I have had about this once story over time.

Most importantly I hope that you might come back and write more in the future!

the whole femdom thing pretty much ruined that. Bleh.