Your stories with priscilla, the bridesmaid and even with the mother were better. Those three can be made into series. We need a mother-in-law and more sisters-in-law.
by
Anonymous07/07/05
What you said it was...
It was a quickie, which was good but there were some grammar errors and if she was going to dominate him then you should have laid that groundwork...
by
Anonymous07/09/05
thank you
the impregnation of his daughter was the icing on the cake thanks
you know you gotta continue this one in the church. the story is good ground work for at least 2 more parts
by
Anonymous07/27/05
good
great please more
by
Anonymous08/21/05
I like this story.
Loved the dialogue between daughter and father. Leave the character's as is and build on that. The daughter taking control of the family would be sweet. To many character's involved would make the situation less desirable. I like the intimate situation between father, daughter and mother. Humiliation of the mother would be the icing on the cake.
by
Anonymous09/23/05
hottest thing I've read on the site
This was one of the hottest stories I've ever read on this site! Please keep this story-line going. I would love to hear about how they fuck in church, and how she does have his son!
by
Anonymous11/09/05
hmm
Why does a woman have to be put down and degraded, so that another woman feels superior? This story had the potential to be hot, but you kept talking about one woman's weight yet praising the other female to high heaven. Sounds a bit harsh to me. A woman's sensuality is defined by who she is, not by the clothes she wears or lack of clothes.
Too much cursing is a bit of an overkill as well. I just don't get it how some people think that having a garbage mouth is sexy, especially on a woman. It just makes the woman look uglier. Try making your characters stronger not colder.
-From a fellow writer in Literotica.
by
Anonymous12/29/05
So hot!!!!
This was one hot story! I love the fact that she dominated her father! One of the best I've read here. Will there be more parts?
by
Anonymous12/30/05
hot daughter
mmmmmmm daughter dominating dad, my dick was so hard reading this story. more please
by
Anonymous12/30/05
hot ,I loved it
my dick got very big reading this story and i shot a huge laod ah,ah
by
Anonymous12/30/05
More!
It needs a sequel!
by
Anonymous01/01/06
ignore that guys "hmmm"
loved it, dont mind the user above who rated it a 25, he was obviously made fun of for weight, as for the rest of us, the cursing and rough domination was what done it for me atleast ^^ very nice
by
Anonymous03/17/06
Awesome Story
Please continue this story. Maybe in a 2nd chapter you could tell us what becomes of the mother. I would also love to hear about the daughter actually getting pregnant, marrying her father and starting a whole new family. Totally hot story. Can't wait to read more.
by
Anonymous05/10/06
GREAT STORY
Great Story.... sounds like one of my more memorable fanasies... Would love to read more in this story. Keep writing more.
by
Anonymous11/07/06
yea. "hmmm" is a prude
i agree that hmmmm has had some problems in his life. this was a great story. maybe he loves it when women use good manners during sex. lol
It was certainly an interesting attempt... Too short for my likes. Background relationship between father and daughter could have been stronger and stronger character build-up would have been preferred. Also a lack of versatility with word usage. Try finding a thesaurus. Constantly using "Dick" and "Pussy" gets tiring and dull.
by
Anonymous06/08/08
Goooood!
This Is One Hell Of A Story. Please Get Us Thee Next Chapters Quik!
by
Anonymous06/27/08
Hot Story
A father and daughter fucking is great. They were both of age and they enjoyed fucking, so why shouldn't they do it. I especially liked the way he shoved his cock deep and squirted his cum all the way up her cunt. Fathers should fuck their daughters once they are old enough. And this story was a good one to jack off to. That was nice too.
does every story really have to start with an eighteen year old girl? Maybe just once she could be 16 or 22. It's just a story. Nobody on this site has the right to call anybody else a pervert. Come on! ;-) other than that, great story.
by
Anonymous06/18/09
more description of Dee please
What are her measurements?Which celeb does she resemble?Nationality?
Lines like "'Yes, Daddy! You cannot resist me! It is futile. I will have your baby! I will give you a son, unlike that fat bitch you're married to! Now impregnate your daughter like the bad girl she is! I'm such a nasty slut! I LOVE IT!'" tell you everything, you need to know to dispose this text.
The only "quality" of your story is that it seemingly contains no plagiarism. Thus your story's quality averages in at 0.1 points (best possible = 5.0). Your story receives a malus of -1 for being completely inhuman tripe.
oh to have daughters like that
Keep up the good work
by
Anonymous10/15/10
VERY GOOD STORY!!!
It was a very hot story and text between caracters is very good and exiting!
Hope you'll do a second part!
by
Anonymous02/15/11
That was HOTT
that was fucking hott!! i loved it!!! more moree!!!!!
by
Anonymous02/19/11
ouch.
Dude I feel bad for the wife...
by
Anonymous03/24/11
OMFG!
I want a dady to fuck my pussy!
by
Anonymous04/01/11
MMMMM!
That was so hot\\!!
by
Anonymous04/24/11
Wow
My ultimate fantasy.
by
Anonymous06/02/11
wows
wow dat was super awesome! *cat*
by
Anonymous06/28/11
sooooo goodd!!
fuck i want my daddy's sperm up in my womb
by
Anonymous07/04/11
Hell Yes
God, that was fucking hot. Keep it up! I wish this had happened to me. I want my very own Papa to fuck me and Give me his beautiful baby.
by
Anonymous07/09/11
That was fucking hot, made me so horny, had me cumming real good. Keep it up! Part 2 and 3?
by
Anonymous08/01/11
Need Release!
Now I want my daddy to ram his big 10 1/2 inch daddy dick in my 18 year old virgin pussy so bad that im dripping right now. Oh here he comes, oh fuck im gonna ride his big 4 in wide cock forever, he's never gonna leave my pussy!!!
by
Anonymous08/16/11
Mmmmm
Ohh hot damn! My pussy is so hot! I want my daddy's cock uP in my hot, dirty, naughty little pussy. Oh yesss...
by
Anonymous08/25/11
I Want a girl for sex
Call me 9604716808.i never had sex.i realy want to satisfy my self.
by
Anonymous09/02/11
Reading that only made this pussy wetter. As I play with my wet dripping pussy, vibrator against my swollen clit and dildos inside my pussy and the other slowly pushed in my little ass. Wish daddy's cock was in my wet pussy and uncle doing me hard from behind.
by
Anonymous09/15/11
Fuck! My pussy got so wet from reading this! I wish my daddy was here to shove his fat cock in me pussy!
by
Anonymous10/17/11
After me and my 5 cousins read that they fucked me hard until my pussy weared out.......ahhhhhh they are fucking me again i wish that we could always do this fucking thinh my pussy is dripping wet
by
Anonymous11/14/11
Mmm hot
I want to be a daddy drop me a text 3862374522 if ur looking for a daddy
by
Anonymous11/20/11
i need a daddy!
Ohh god! My pussy is sooo wet! Who's looking for a daughter of their own 2 fuck?????
4198100538
I need it&I want it
by
Anonymous01/23/12
WTF???
Burn hell u freak !!! These comments r gross :( y the F*@k wanna have sex own daughter? Now what leave ur wife 4 ur daughter? U 2 get marryed have children on ur own?? White people r crazy
by
Anonymous01/28/12
whatever
to those who say incest is gross and burn in hell etc... i have 2 things to say. 1) this is just a story on the internet and 2) um, if you really feel that way... why the hell are you on this site to begin with, hmm?
Fucking hot
Tell us more
Hot...
... as Hell...
Lukas
OH MY
INCREDIBLE. PLEASE DONT STOP.
Not as good
Your stories with priscilla, the bridesmaid and even with the mother were better. Those three can be made into series. We need a mother-in-law and more sisters-in-law.
What you said it was...
It was a quickie, which was good but there were some grammar errors and if she was going to dominate him then you should have laid that groundwork...
thank you
the impregnation of his daughter was the icing on the cake thanks
the hell...
you know you gotta continue this one in the church. the story is good ground work for at least 2 more parts
good
great please more
I like this story.
Loved the dialogue between daughter and father. Leave the character's as is and build on that. The daughter taking control of the family would be sweet. To many character's involved would make the situation less desirable. I like the intimate situation between father, daughter and mother. Humiliation of the mother would be the icing on the cake.
hottest thing I've read on the site
This was one of the hottest stories I've ever read on this site! Please keep this story-line going. I would love to hear about how they fuck in church, and how she does have his son!
hmm
Why does a woman have to be put down and degraded, so that another woman feels superior? This story had the potential to be hot, but you kept talking about one woman's weight yet praising the other female to high heaven. Sounds a bit harsh to me. A woman's sensuality is defined by who she is, not by the clothes she wears or lack of clothes.
Too much cursing is a bit of an overkill as well. I just don't get it how some people think that having a garbage mouth is sexy, especially on a woman. It just makes the woman look uglier. Try making your characters stronger not colder.
-From a fellow writer in Literotica.
So hot!!!!
This was one hot story! I love the fact that she dominated her father! One of the best I've read here. Will there be more parts?
hot daughter
mmmmmmm daughter dominating dad, my dick was so hard reading this story. more please
hot ,I loved it
my dick got very big reading this story and i shot a huge laod ah,ah
More!
It needs a sequel!
ignore that guys "hmmm"
loved it, dont mind the user above who rated it a 25, he was obviously made fun of for weight, as for the rest of us, the cursing and rough domination was what done it for me atleast ^^ very nice
Awesome Story
Please continue this story. Maybe in a 2nd chapter you could tell us what becomes of the mother. I would also love to hear about the daughter actually getting pregnant, marrying her father and starting a whole new family. Totally hot story. Can't wait to read more.
GREAT STORY
Great Story.... sounds like one of my more memorable fanasies... Would love to read more in this story. Keep writing more.
yea. "hmmm" is a prude
i agree that hmmmm has had some problems in his life. this was a great story. maybe he loves it when women use good manners during sex. lol
HOT...
and so squishingly Yummy...
Interesting attempt
It was certainly an interesting attempt... Too short for my likes. Background relationship between father and daughter could have been stronger and stronger character build-up would have been preferred. Also a lack of versatility with word usage. Try finding a thesaurus. Constantly using "Dick" and "Pussy" gets tiring and dull.
Goooood!
This Is One Hell Of A Story. Please Get Us Thee Next Chapters Quik!
Hot Story
A father and daughter fucking is great. They were both of age and they enjoyed fucking, so why shouldn't they do it. I especially liked the way he shoved his cock deep and squirted his cum all the way up her cunt. Fathers should fuck their daughters once they are old enough. And this story was a good one to jack off to. That was nice too.
Quick fun!
Thanks!
really
does every story really have to start with an eighteen year old girl? Maybe just once she could be 16 or 22. It's just a story. Nobody on this site has the right to call anybody else a pervert. Come on! ;-) other than that, great story.
more description of Dee please
What are her measurements?Which celeb does she resemble?Nationality?
ZOIKS!
*glomp Wannabeboytoy* ^.^
Er...
Lines like "'Yes, Daddy! You cannot resist me! It is futile. I will have your baby! I will give you a son, unlike that fat bitch you're married to! Now impregnate your daughter like the bad girl she is! I'm such a nasty slut! I LOVE IT!'" tell you everything, you need to know to dispose this text.
–AJ
EQ: 0.1 Points
IMA (1) ERO (1) ATM (0) SOP (0) DIS (-1)
The only "quality" of your story is that it seemingly contains no plagiarism. Thus your story's quality averages in at 0.1 points (best possible = 5.0). Your story receives a malus of -1 for being completely inhuman tripe.
great
oh to have daughters like that
Keep up the good work
VERY GOOD STORY!!!
It was a very hot story and text between caracters is very good and exiting!
Hope you'll do a second part!
That was HOTT
that was fucking hott!! i loved it!!! more moree!!!!!
ouch.
Dude I feel bad for the wife...
OMFG!
I want a dady to fuck my pussy!
MMMMM!
That was so hot\\!!
Wow
My ultimate fantasy.
wows
wow dat was super awesome! *cat*
sooooo goodd!!
fuck i want my daddy's sperm up in my womb
Hell Yes
God, that was fucking hot. Keep it up! I wish this had happened to me. I want my very own Papa to fuck me and Give me his beautiful baby.
That was fucking hot, made me so horny, had me cumming real good. Keep it up! Part 2 and 3?
Need Release!
Now I want my daddy to ram his big 10 1/2 inch daddy dick in my 18 year old virgin pussy so bad that im dripping right now. Oh here he comes, oh fuck im gonna ride his big 4 in wide cock forever, he's never gonna leave my pussy!!!
Mmmmm
Ohh hot damn! My pussy is so hot! I want my daddy's cock uP in my hot, dirty, naughty little pussy. Oh yesss...
I Want a girl for sex
Call me 9604716808.i never had sex.i realy want to satisfy my self.
Reading that only made this pussy wetter. As I play with my wet dripping pussy, vibrator against my swollen clit and dildos inside my pussy and the other slowly pushed in my little ass. Wish daddy's cock was in my wet pussy and uncle doing me hard from behind.
Fuck! My pussy got so wet from reading this! I wish my daddy was here to shove his fat cock in me pussy!
After me and my 5 cousins read that they fucked me hard until my pussy weared out.......ahhhhhh they are fucking me again i wish that we could always do this fucking thinh my pussy is dripping wet
Mmm hot
I want to be a daddy drop me a text 3862374522 if ur looking for a daddy
i need a daddy!
Ohh god! My pussy is sooo wet! Who's looking for a daughter of their own 2 fuck?????
4198100538
I need it&I want it
WTF???
Burn hell u freak !!! These comments r gross :( y the F*@k wanna have sex own daughter? Now what leave ur wife 4 ur daughter? U 2 get marryed have children on ur own?? White people r crazy
whatever
to those who say incest is gross and burn in hell etc... i have 2 things to say. 1) this is just a story on the internet and 2) um, if you really feel that way... why the hell are you on this site to begin with, hmm?
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