great story nice writing ,looking forward to the continuation
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Anonymous07/07/05
Well now!!!
Good story, but i don't like it when there is that much deception amoung the family members. Also why didn't they tell Paul long before they told Casey, after all he is alot older than her. Even though he was away and a navy ship, the mom and aunt could have still waited to tell him about their long time affair. No I think they told Casey first because they wanted her to JOIN them in their bedroom games more than they wanted Paul. I can see now just which family member is LOVED more in that family, I know because believe it or not "your choice" something VERY similer happened to me 23 years back. I wasn't in the Service though but I was over seas for a couple years, my sister, aunt where in an hot and heavy affair. They decided to tell my aunts two "much younger" daughters about it and waited for a whole year AFTER I came home for good. I was really hurt, and haven't talked to any of them for over 20 years....
No mas! No mas! Paul is a dead duck. Three hot, horny, sexy, LOVING women, and one sailor home from the sea. Yep...Dead duck city...niiiiccce...
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Anonymous01/01/07
very hot
My god what a way to go""
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Anonymous07/28/07
great!
Funny and somehow real..lots of good detail.
Would make a funny movie
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Anonymous04/27/08
stupid
you have a lot of idiots reading your stories that think this is a great story it is a piece of unrealistic shit no guy would act like that first if his cousin was teasing him that bad before he sure wouldn't come home and live with them he would arrainge to stay on base second if he was stupid enough to stay at home as soon as she walked into his room naked he would have yelled at her to get the hell out then got up and left the room telling his mom and aunt what she did and that he would not stand for such shit and he would start lokking for housing on base or with friends keep it realistic sounding and believable
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Anonymous11/18/08
Deceptive Family
Too many lies and deception. Basically his aunt pimped out Casey (her daughter) to pave the way for her affair with his mother. Okay, hypothetically, lets ignore the incest angle. His relatinship with Casey was based on a lie. The fact that his mother knew about what Casey was going to do and went along with it, says volumes about her. His aunt had her agenda and went about it ruthlessly to attain it. After all of these lies and deceit he had no problems at all and just joined in. I don't think so.
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Anonymous07/29/09
Okay.
Don't get me wrong I enjoyed the sex part, however, the story felt rather rushed. I think the story would have been more enjoyable and a lot sexier if everything had been a little more gradual.
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Anonymous01/08/13
typical for this writer
yet another unrealistic waste of time from many feathers he writes like he is six cans short of a six pack and six sheets to the wind. it seems he either pays well for rave reviews or most of the readers are as drunk and stupid as he is.
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Anonymous11/16/13
well looks like all his boats floated in...
but it was rather predictable that he would end up fucking them all as well as the two sisters being raving sluts as well as the cousin......lacked finesse and subtlety.....just a raving bunch of three nymphos together allowing him to join them....the sooner he gets back to sea the better
English
Now this is a great story!
This isnt the first time I have put myself inside your storys...*grin*
Playing and having some Hot thoughts here.
Thanks MF
HI sis :)
Excellently done.
Great story, great writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Very Good.
Gonna be a hot time at the old homestead from there on, I betcha!! Hope Paul is up to the challenge!!
Kind of Makes You Want To Go AWOL
More then everyman's wet dream. Nice going.
needs something
how about a shemale cousin?
great
great story nice writing ,looking forward to the continuation
Well now!!!
Good story, but i don't like it when there is that much deception amoung the family members. Also why didn't they tell Paul long before they told Casey, after all he is alot older than her. Even though he was away and a navy ship, the mom and aunt could have still waited to tell him about their long time affair. No I think they told Casey first because they wanted her to JOIN them in their bedroom games more than they wanted Paul. I can see now just which family member is LOVED more in that family, I know because believe it or not "your choice" something VERY similer happened to me 23 years back. I wasn't in the Service though but I was over seas for a couple years, my sister, aunt where in an hot and heavy affair. They decided to tell my aunts two "much younger" daughters about it and waited for a whole year AFTER I came home for good. I was really hurt, and haven't talked to any of them for over 20 years....
Paul
hammer17_98
well well
No mas! No mas! Paul is a dead duck. Three hot, horny, sexy, LOVING women, and one sailor home from the sea. Yep...Dead duck city...niiiiccce...
very hot
My god what a way to go""
great!
Funny and somehow real..lots of good detail.
Would make a funny movie
stupid
you have a lot of idiots reading your stories that think this is a great story it is a piece of unrealistic shit no guy would act like that first if his cousin was teasing him that bad before he sure wouldn't come home and live with them he would arrainge to stay on base second if he was stupid enough to stay at home as soon as she walked into his room naked he would have yelled at her to get the hell out then got up and left the room telling his mom and aunt what she did and that he would not stand for such shit and he would start lokking for housing on base or with friends keep it realistic sounding and believable
Deceptive Family
Too many lies and deception. Basically his aunt pimped out Casey (her daughter) to pave the way for her affair with his mother. Okay, hypothetically, lets ignore the incest angle. His relatinship with Casey was based on a lie. The fact that his mother knew about what Casey was going to do and went along with it, says volumes about her. His aunt had her agenda and went about it ruthlessly to attain it. After all of these lies and deceit he had no problems at all and just joined in. I don't think so.
Okay.
Don't get me wrong I enjoyed the sex part, however, the story felt rather rushed. I think the story would have been more enjoyable and a lot sexier if everything had been a little more gradual.
typical for this writer
yet another unrealistic waste of time from many feathers he writes like he is six cans short of a six pack and six sheets to the wind. it seems he either pays well for rave reviews or most of the readers are as drunk and stupid as he is.
well looks like all his boats floated in...
but it was rather predictable that he would end up fucking them all as well as the two sisters being raving sluts as well as the cousin......lacked finesse and subtlety.....just a raving bunch of three nymphos together allowing him to join them....the sooner he gets back to sea the better
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