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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C06/30/05

nice piece

Well written,
I enjoyed the read,
Thanks.
~ J

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by Anonymous06/30/05

Like butter

I feel a certain affinity for this poem...:)

Great work, Seattle!

Flyguy

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by Anonymous06/30/05

Nice and clear

short, smooth, sexy, clear and clean thats 5. sand

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by Anonymous07/01/05

Where's the red H?

This certainly deserves one. Simply lovely, Seattle.

Tess

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by RhymeFairy07/01/05

Drippin*

Mmmm nice imagery. Loved your *flow*~
*Grins*
A hot lil poem here.
Makes one wanna come back for more...and more....

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by dcpoet4407/01/05

is the sweet sap.......

that is produced for the one that licks the drip......and heck.....i used to collect sap a number of years ago. i can really relate to this one........nice write......don

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by Wanton Vixxxen07/01/05

The two last words...

"tongue uncurls" should be the first two words to a sequel poem, rain! This was a sultry erotic poem - a sensuous syrup kind of write that dripped slowly - like sap - from your pen.

Vixxx

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by sack07/01/05

This deserves and "E"...

Where could it be improved?

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by Bill Dada07/04/05

So Much Heat

"puddles of poetry" with steam rising from them. I think it is getting hot in here.
BD

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