All Comments on 'Office Affair'

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sherlock40sherlock40almost 19 years ago
Once again, a great interracial love story

Very erotic story with no stereotypes getting in the way. Thank you for the time and effort you put into your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice but

Does every guy have to play ball. I don't care if he's white though.

cocobrown62cocobrown62almost 19 years ago
Excellent!!

Once again....my fantasy played out in words

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
More Like It

A little more length to a hot story does womders. Really makes it hot. Thank you! Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
brilliant

A great story with the interracial aspect giving it even more zest. More, please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very Well Done

I'm a big fan of your work already, and this story is a fantastic addition. The sex was hot and needful, though as someone else said earlier it was a little too short. Give us more about the characters, make it last longer. Well done! -bluefox07

don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Very, Very Wonderful!

This was very refreshing to see that a white guy could fuck a black woman. Perhaps they need to continue, with her wanting to have a white baby, much like most of these stories showing some white woman getting fucked by a big ole niggah raping her?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WOW!! This was great!

The way it should be done. Not a lot of plot development but just enough. Very hot, great sex. I agree that I am getting a little tired of at least ONE stereotype getting in there (6'5"??) but what the hell? <shrug>

Please send more this way. I am very glad to see more examples of where the white guy is just some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there. Yes, lack women do occasionally find white guys sexy and attractive! :-)

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WTF!!!!!!!!!!

some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there where have you been ass hole. There a agreat deal of black women who love fucking white guys because 1) they are much more considerate, 2) smell better, 3) taste better, and they fuck better. They work to get the woman off not just plug her cunt or ass hople. You are a sad sack of shit for a man or woman when you wrote that comment. V

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
ha

That last comment was a load of bullshit. All of the black men that I have been with have been very considerate of how I felt. And none of them have ever "smelled bad" or "tasted bad". Black men are usually very clean, and I think that I would know because I am a black woman and I have been with mostly black males.

Great Story by the way!

lizzybit26lizzybit26almost 19 years ago
Very hot story

Good story and the sex was hot! Unlike other stories, there were no blatant stereotypes, just two people enjoying each other. Thanks for putting this out there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
COME ON!

You have to give us more of these two. This is one of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Please write more about James and Debby

Plese write a follow-up. I fell in love with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
follow-up

Please write another chapter involving these two. It was so hot and very erotic...I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
LOVE IT!!!!

i love this shit!!! u have to right a follow up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Story

So many degrading stories of white men out there (and yes I'm well endowed,thick (9) and multiorgasmic), Personnaly Love black women and have been with more than a few. Do so love the contrasting skin tones. It is nice that this story is more of enjoying people who happen to be differant races. Can do without the degrading of any race and just get down to some hot erotic talk and real action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please....

Finish! Finish!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
...................

Please hurry and finish..this is really really good!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Yes

Damn...hot office love affair turns into marriage (hint-more on them.)

got2luvmelgot2luvmelover 12 years ago
Still

LOVE this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Damn, If you must get caught having sex at the office.....

Make sure the cleaning crew speaks no English!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Titties?

The concept is great but the dialog was like a very low budget and poorly written porn...smh...you could have used several synonyms for "titties", such as breasts/boobs/jugs/tits even or anything else that didn't make me feel as if I was reading something by a teen that has very little experience with the real thing.

I'm not usually so harsh but this piece let me down for even the quick masterbation inspiration I was looking for.

OktobreSinnLadiaOktobreSinnLadiaabout 11 years ago
A Bundle Of Joy

I am hoping and praying Debby has James' baby in the near future. This man loves reading about interracial sex!

RogerONeilRogerONeilover 9 years ago
Where's Your Office????

WOW short sassy and sooo sexy. can hardly wait for your next story good thoughts good writing good work luv it

birdymamabirdymamaover 7 years ago
Ha-Haa

I liked the story. it was a great quick read. and the end shocked me and made me giggle

hunghandsumhunghandsumabout 4 years ago
Office Affair -2

Please say this is only the beginning! I'm anxious to see what happens when the office door opens and where they take this from here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Disappointed

Story was great, but there should already have been a 2 since this was written so long ago.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literate6 months ago

Hmm, I don’t see this working out for them long term. Office romance can get pretty messy so bring on the drama in the next chapter. Perhaps her direct boss has an agenda. They say two is better than one. 🤷🏻‍♀️

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