A little more length to a hot story does womders. Really makes it hot. Thank you! Ronnie W.
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Anonymous07/07/05
brilliant
A great story with the interracial aspect giving it even more zest. More, please
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Anonymous07/07/05
Very Well Done
I'm a big fan of your work already, and this story is a fantastic addition. The sex was hot and needful, though as someone else said earlier it was a little too short. Give us more about the characters, make it last longer. Well done! -bluefox07
This was very refreshing to see that a white guy could fuck a black woman. Perhaps they need to continue, with her wanting to have a white baby, much like most of these stories showing some white woman getting fucked by a big ole niggah raping her?
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Anonymous07/07/05
WOW!! This was great!
The way it should be done. Not a lot of plot development but just enough. Very hot, great sex. I agree that I am getting a little tired of at least ONE stereotype getting in there (6'5"??) but what the hell?
Please send more this way. I am very glad to see more examples of where the white guy is just some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there. Yes, lack women do occasionally find white guys sexy and attractive! :-)
Keep up the great work!
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Anonymous07/07/05
WTF!!!!!!!!!!
some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there where have you been ass hole. There a agreat deal of black women who love fucking white guys because 1) they are much more considerate, 2) smell better, 3) taste better, and they fuck better. They work to get the woman off not just plug her cunt or ass hople. You are a sad sack of shit for a man or woman when you wrote that comment. V
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Anonymous07/09/05
ha
That last comment was a load of bullshit. All of the black men that I have been with have been very considerate of how I felt. And none of them have ever "smelled bad" or "tasted bad". Black men are usually very clean, and I think that I would know because I am a black woman and I have been with mostly black males.
Good story and the sex was hot! Unlike other stories, there were no blatant stereotypes, just two people enjoying each other. Thanks for putting this out there!
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Anonymous10/26/05
COME ON!
You have to give us more of these two. This is one of my favorites.
by
Anonymous11/29/05
Please write more about James and Debby
Plese write a follow-up. I fell in love with this story.
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Anonymous04/07/06
follow-up
Please write another chapter involving these two. It was so hot and very erotic...I want more!
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Anonymous09/18/06
LOVE IT!!!!
i love this shit!!! u have to right a follow up!!!
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Anonymous07/21/08
Nice Story
So many degrading stories of white men out there (and yes I'm well endowed,thick (9) and multiorgasmic), Personnaly Love black women and have been with more than a few. Do so love the contrasting skin tones. It is nice that this story is more of enjoying people who happen to be differant races. Can do without the degrading of any race and just get down to some hot erotic talk and real action.
Damn, If you must get caught having sex at the office.....
Make sure the cleaning crew speaks no English!
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Anonymous11/29/12
Titties?
The concept is great but the dialog was like a very low budget and poorly written porn...smh...you could have used several synonyms for "titties", such as breasts/boobs/jugs/tits even or anything else that didn't make me feel as if I was reading something by a teen that has very little experience with the real thing.
I'm not usually so harsh but this piece let me down for even the quick masterbation inspiration I was looking for.
Once again, a great interracial love story
Very erotic story with no stereotypes getting in the way. Thank you for the time and effort you put into your stories.
Nice but
Does every guy have to play ball. I don't care if he's white though.
Excellent!!
Once again....my fantasy played out in words
More Like It
A little more length to a hot story does womders. Really makes it hot. Thank you! Ronnie W.
brilliant
A great story with the interracial aspect giving it even more zest. More, please
Very Well Done
I'm a big fan of your work already, and this story is a fantastic addition. The sex was hot and needful, though as someone else said earlier it was a little too short. Give us more about the characters, make it last longer. Well done! -bluefox07
Very, Very Wonderful!
This was very refreshing to see that a white guy could fuck a black woman. Perhaps they need to continue, with her wanting to have a white baby, much like most of these stories showing some white woman getting fucked by a big ole niggah raping her?
WOW!! This was great!
The way it should be done. Not a lot of plot development but just enough. Very hot, great sex. I agree that I am getting a little tired of at least ONE stereotype getting in there (6'5"??) but what the hell?
Please send more this way. I am very glad to see more examples of where the white guy is just some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there. Yes, lack women do occasionally find white guys sexy and attractive! :-)
Keep up the great work!
WTF!!!!!!!!!!
some poor limp dicked asshole who can't carry his own against the big bag world out there where have you been ass hole. There a agreat deal of black women who love fucking white guys because 1) they are much more considerate, 2) smell better, 3) taste better, and they fuck better. They work to get the woman off not just plug her cunt or ass hople. You are a sad sack of shit for a man or woman when you wrote that comment. V
ha
That last comment was a load of bullshit. All of the black men that I have been with have been very considerate of how I felt. And none of them have ever "smelled bad" or "tasted bad". Black men are usually very clean, and I think that I would know because I am a black woman and I have been with mostly black males.
Great Story by the way!
Very hot story
Good story and the sex was hot! Unlike other stories, there were no blatant stereotypes, just two people enjoying each other. Thanks for putting this out there!
COME ON!
You have to give us more of these two. This is one of my favorites.
Please write more about James and Debby
Plese write a follow-up. I fell in love with this story.
follow-up
Please write another chapter involving these two. It was so hot and very erotic...I want more!
LOVE IT!!!!
i love this shit!!! u have to right a follow up!!!
Nice Story
So many degrading stories of white men out there (and yes I'm well endowed,thick (9) and multiorgasmic), Personnaly Love black women and have been with more than a few. Do so love the contrasting skin tones. It is nice that this story is more of enjoying people who happen to be differant races. Can do without the degrading of any race and just get down to some hot erotic talk and real action.
Please....
Finish! Finish!
*****
Hot!
...................
Please hurry and finish..this is really really good!
Yes
Damn...hot office love affair turns into marriage (hint-more on them.)
Still
LOVE this story!
Damn, If you must get caught having sex at the office.....
Make sure the cleaning crew speaks no English!
Titties?
The concept is great but the dialog was like a very low budget and poorly written porn...smh...you could have used several synonyms for "titties", such as breasts/boobs/jugs/tits even or anything else that didn't make me feel as if I was reading something by a teen that has very little experience with the real thing.
I'm not usually so harsh but this piece let me down for even the quick masterbation inspiration I was looking for.
A Bundle Of Joy
I am hoping and praying Debby has James' baby in the near future. This man loves reading about interracial sex!
Where's Your Office????
WOW short sassy and sooo sexy. can hardly wait for your next story good thoughts good writing good work luv it
Ha-Haa
I liked the story. it was a great quick read. and the end shocked me and made me giggle
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