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Beautiful
River in drought
Bed becomes sand
Drowned in doubt
Taste turned bland
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Beautiful imagery.
Such heartbreak.
Sadness.
Love this sad lil poem.
Beautifully written
I can only echo RhymeFairy's comment,
such a sad poem written so elegantly.
River in drought
Bed becomes sand
Drowned in doubt
Taste turned bland
Wonderful Imagery,
more pls!
Thanks.
~ Jenn
wasted?
if you look back and think you have wasted your life, then that is when it is time to fix it.
good tone....
and the message i can relate to. i especially like the *quo and glow* of the rhyme. over all...nice job......don
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A sad look at the past.
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