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The Making of a Slave

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by KTHESLAVE07/06/05

Wow!

Wow, this was an interesting story. I loved it! I liked the way he made her do those thing on the first day of their meeting. Wonderful!

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by Mastersall07/07/05

EXCELLENT BEGINNING !

GREAT BEGINNING.. GOOD CHARACTERS AND JUST ENOUGH TO LEAD US TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT

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by WFEATHER07/07/05

A Very Good Start!!!

I am definitely looking forward to the continuation of this series ;-)

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by Anonymous07/07/05

More, please.

That was so hot. Nice ending to a tiring day! Please write more, looking forward to it! :)

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by DreamInTheDesert07/21/05

Thanks for all of your feedback

Being rather a novice at erotic stories, I am thrilled that you all left such kind comments. I will be continuing this story very soon, I plan on making several chapters. Thanks again!

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by interpreter_x04/18/14

an enjoyable piece.

I definitely enjoyed this piece of bdsm fiction and found it interesting and arousing, a bit more of a build up to the sex, including the beginning of the relationship and some of the interaction between the two characters that led up to their eventual meeting would have intensified the erotic pay off to the story but I don't fault you for writing a shorter piece. I definitely enjoyed the dirty talk between the characters and the submission of the female protagonist as well as the harsh coldness of her male foil.

I hope I see a sequel to this story, thanks for submitting your work!

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