All Comments on 'Little Sister's First Time Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Story seems to be degenerating

This story is going to the dogs. It started off quite well, but now it has generated into another family-fuck-fest.

For people who love this kind of trash,you are most welcome to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Decent story... better than most

Pretty good story... I thought the beginning was pretty hot... but I don't think adding the Mom walking in at the last part of it really added anything and may have detracted somewhat... It was a good effort though... most authors here don't put much of any effort into their stories... I hope you keep writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

get mom in to the action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good story

Good but what happen next ch. 05????? crh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
why you stop the story of sister first time

good fun story of family fun,now mom and dad have join the fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
is there a chapter 05

come now that not end is there...mom cums in. Ha ha...that got be funny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Family Fuck Fest

It was a hell of a story. Family fuck fest do it. We all can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SEXY HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Boy I wish i had a brother and family that could fuck like that! Keep it up Mom's turn now can't wait for the next hopfuly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Man.....

Just me or It's gross when a dad fucks her daughter....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
tease much

come on! how could you tease me and leave it unanswered?! RawwR

sshine55sshine55over 13 years ago
getting in the room

how did dad get in the bedroom if the brother went over and locked the door when little sister came in his room without any clothes on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
5? 6? so on

need 5 and 6 and so on good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
meh

Two stars ... sorry.

saintmichael95saintmichael95over 7 years ago
Wait a fucking second...

The brother locked the door! So how the fuck did their Dad get in?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Erotic

Good job on the chapters. You made her a real woman with a hairy pussy and an insatiable horniness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gross

You ruined it by adding the dad

beanburner69beanburner69almost 6 years ago
not ruined

Please nail Mom, then Aunt And maybe Grandma

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sister luv

I fully agree that this beautiful exciting story has been partly ruined by adding the Dad. .and more. .when the Mom will probably join them in a 4 th chapter!

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 3 years ago
ok but

you could have kept them exclusive. bro/sis love is pure and not to be shared. in my opinion. great story though.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

WTF over 18 years ago!?!?!? No new chapter with mom?? 11/17/2023 !! Today date!

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