Swapping Wives Ch. 05

NICE

Nice series of stories. thanks

Good Series

Unfortunately in the real world this ecenario doesn't play out this way where they all live happily everafter.

Usually when one of the wives gets pissed at her husband about some bullshit, the first thing you hear is " Well he sure the hell wouldn't trat me like that, or he would never do that to me or for me.' Then the shit would hit the fan. Or worse still , one of the pairs would go to meeting the other spouse in a situation outside the bounds they had set for themselves, and thhe worst of all scenarios, falling in LOVE or uncontrolled JEALOUSY.

Closer but

you still degrade yourself - with your skills you don't need to write this silly non-erotic but sick crap. Unless of course you are content with the non-realities of fuck and suck in a marital story where it is easy to get off a balanced shared track and into a sick seperate bedroom or house where no spouse can compete with what happens in your mind. There are no likeable characters here and yet they love each other more - cmon (pussy whipping and corn up the ass love? - lust but no respect or love)!

For you to bend and shape it otherwise isn't credible for the story or yourself as an author. Surely you can see that can't you? I hope you are better than this sham as I know you can be!

Wonderful

Personally, I happen to think this series is wonderful, maybe that's because my husband and I have some very "good" friends and we love to share. This series is actually very realistic to those of us open minded enough to give it a try. Thanks for writing it and keep up the good work.

SO HOT!!!

I don't know if I could ever really be comfortable swinging/swapping myself, even with a very willing partner. But something about the idea of it--especially when double penetration and female bisexuality are involved--is just incredibly erotic, and the way you describe it really made my balls boil!

As for your detractors, they would do well to remember that this site is called "litEROTICA," not "litreality" or "litidealism"!

Not my cup of tea

The entire series was very sick. Why bother getting married? As a writer I think you have a warped mind to write garbage like this and you should be ashamed of yourself.

Well Written

But pure fantasy, marriages will never be the same. When one couple has a fight and partner throws up how much better the other person got fucked than the shit hits the fan. Or one couple gets caught together when not a agreed to swap. Real life does not follow art, its messy and this would get real messy real quick.

Absolute Best!

This was one of the best stories I have read on this site!!!

Five parts could have been seven.

Then another couple added.

And another.

Damn, but I am greedy! Please consider adding onto this story. Your writing is excellent and very believable. AND VERY EROTIC!

Please, please please add more chapters.

Regardless of what others may say, I thoroughly enjoyed your yarn.
It came across as a possible(?) adventure between good friends with just a little quirky humour. Well done and keep up the good work.

Very Good

Congratulations. A wonderfull history.