All Comments on 'Office Obsession - Her POV'

I do like all your stories and style of writing. But you're much better at writing the male perspective. There's a certain lack in the female writing which unfortunately let's the reader know that you're male. Sometimes the way you describe her body is more "male" or should I say masculine.... And it takes away from the believability of the story. I know we live in a gender fluid world etc etc but you may benefit from having a females co edit or co write your female perspective stories. However I still really like your writing. Keep it up. Just trying to provide helpful feedback. Elle x

how thoughtful of you to write #redheadslave, I appreciate it! would be interested to know which POV from A Morning Wank was more compelling to you, the male or female POV... :)

:-)

The heroine of the story is a KEEPER!

I will read the same story from his POV at a later date, & comment on it.

Besides "His POV", the characters are developed in the Sodomy in Napa Valley series. :)