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Reading this could be dangerous....
I'm already getting a "split personality" just trying to figure it out! Do you really need Schitzophrenia split at the end? Without it, the reader would have to come up with his/her own solution or ideas here, and the poem might have been even more thought-provoking!
stirs up strong images....
in aspects of my illness. i can sense that feeling of being confused personally. the poem though, shows the splits in personalities very well. the pace of it is fast and depicts how the thinking is in such a condition. the imagery is captured nicely and leaves questions unanswered as to how this can be. an excellent poem and conveyed very well......don
A VERY STRONG
reality , and I LOVED THE ENDING... broken pieces, as the disease ! YEH, i do get it , and I am a blonde, lol... VERY GOOD WORK ! sweet GA peaches..
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Or maybe it's going over the edge.
Excellent.....
I loved the ending
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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FROM THE GYN TABLE AND SADDLE
to everyday frustrations, TK U MLJ LV NV
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