All Comments on 'The Farmer's Daughter Ch. 01'

Try learning correct gammar, I gave up trying to read the story because of so many errors. EG sweated, bented over

I won't even bother to check it out . . .

mate i thought i was ok i mean i know wt u meant just maybe next time check it but was good hopefully next time be spealt rite lol any way was good

Now don't get bented out of shapeded but what is a boobier? (Cee Bio) Is it like a dumb guy - maybe a rube boob?

These are critical elements of rudimentary language so we need to know. Also, is boobiers the plural of boobier or is it just two boobierz hanging around together? Oh cmon, just havin fun like you r.

Onward and upward eh.

What? are u plagarizing again? I thought I was reading a drug statement they put in the pkg ur drugs come in. Get real u idiot and learn how to spell and which to, too; to use at the correct time. [ to (makes a verb work); too (adds to adverb, too much, too long, too thick, too dumb to write a decent story).

But it appears your heart is in the right place, so keep on, maybe you'll give me a hardon. Good writing takes PRACTICE, PRACTICE, PRACTICE!!!!

So, keep writing.

Rudy

Best story I have ever red....

1/ English is not your native language

2/ When you were supposed to be in class you were behind the school, jerking off.

3/ You're really only 15 years old.

4/ You typed this one handed because your "good hand" was busy.

5/ Your parents took "Huked on fonix" to heart and we're seeing how well it "reelee wurks"

6/ All of the above

All you no name bitches. Leave your name and email address next time you punk motherfuckers! I want to see you jackasses write a fucking story! If you think you're so fucking good. Edit my shit bitch! Talk is cheap from people who don't leave their email address and names!

I didn't vote. Obviously somebody doesn't know what a "boobier" is. A "boobier" is someone who works with boobs for a living, haha. In all seriousness, get an editor, make your (indicating possesion) story more realistic. You're (abbreviation for "you are")a struggling author just give it more of your time and energy. Keep writing.

I agree with most of the other commentors. Your rudimentary knowledge of english grammar made your story agonizing to read. Get an editor or take some grammar/spelling classes.

Your stories are fantastic. I especially loved this one. Please KEEP writing!