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byDu Lac©
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by Anonymous

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by sack07/03/05

a nice message...

simply and eloquently shared....thanks for writing this!

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by Jennifer C07/03/05

A thought provoking piece

Really well written
and gives out a positive
message, when i finished
reading it I wanted to read
it again and I did!
Nicely done,
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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by dcpoet4407/03/05

i believe the message.....

conveys this in a sense. each of us is a monument. we have the choice to build it the way we'd like it. this is written very well as there are many areas that speak to me.....but i'll leave this one:-----don

For time flies
and soon aged bones will no longer carry the burden
of a life lived in the dark.

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by My Erotic Tale07/03/05

Inspirational

No body do it like the Du~
words of wisdom that even I can understand
very nice write Du~

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by Anonymous07/04/05

o)) du

u r over the top ..on this..just perfectly penned ..
"Do not lie down with dogs of a dredging world,
when on your knees let faith pull you up,
You are not alone!
For dogs too crave a peaceful soul."
reminds me of dido some how...that song white flag...
just incredible stuff du...lol/blue

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by quietpoet07/04/05

perfect title

There, in your words, lies the key to all that is, and all that can possibly be... BALANCE! Thank you for sharing your lovely talent (person) with us (me...!)

John

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by sweet GA peaches11/13/05

youmust have

the most beautiful soul,
to write words such as
these that burn long
into hearts, that need
reminding..
we are only here once,
and may we leave behind,
a trail that others
may follow, in our path..
with the honor of all that
came before...

shine on sweet diamond !

-sGp-

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by Trolly12/11/05

From Under the Bridge

Mutual stroking continues. So sad.

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by Bill Dada01/01/06

Trolly made his choice

And I'll make mine:

'Faith..........
When we have this miracle
No longer do we care that we are outsiders'

ty,bd

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by lindiana03/12/06

Wonderful

You've taken the thoughts of many and expressed them.

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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The choices we make in a world in flux are important beyond our immediate realm.

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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The choices we make in a world in flux are important beyond our immediate realm.

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