I love the way this story is starting. I have found few stories of this type. I will be waiting for the continuation of this story.
Great story, as usual. I think this is my equivilant to a woman's rape fantasy -- it's a tremendous turn-on conceptually, but I would never actually want to experience it.
At any rate, you mentioned in your opening rant that you had submitted this story to other sites and it was well received. Would you mind sharing the names of those sites? I figure if it is well received there, it will attract more stories like this.
BTW, my absolute all time favorite story is one called "My Neighbor's Sex Slave, My Wife", by Al the Penman. I especially like the idea that even though the wife loves her husband, and has no desire to be cruel to him, she is so under the neighbors control that she denies her husband, but, as ordered, constantly teases him with what he can't have.
Please continue, plenty of us here like femdom stories and this one has a very promising start.
Loved the flowing pre-cum part..give us more please..how about the good lady doctor and nurse smoke cigarellos during the exam..lots of smoking fetish fans reading.
Wow! You're getting some good feedback. Good stuff.
I read your note about the responses you've been getting. When I submitted stories (slutslave201) I got several negative responses. My reply to them was, "Why are you reading this?".
I think the very nature of literotica leaves us open to this type of reply because it caters to so many different facets of human sexuality. Posted on other sites that cater to Female Domination, I'm sure your stories are very well recieved. I do think it would be great if Literotica created a separate Female Domination section.
Keep up the good work though. You have plenty of readers out here!
Need the address of the clinic in your story. I'm not ready for kids...but perhaps I should get checked out ;D
have a great read
I have felt the same way about this site and the comments I have received from readers who should not have been reading my stories at all.
There really should be a Femdom F/m category, but until there is, be assured that I love reading your stories and always vote 5*
I am sorry that all the work you put in to getting 'the perfect ambiance' is not appreciated by some. Shame on them. You really do produce excellent stories.
Best wishes, Jane.
The entire story is in italics instead of the author's note only because you used the wrong slash to break the code.
/ is right. \ is wrong
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